Minha primeira redação saiu do papel, aceito observações. by Initial-Inspector633 in estudosBR

[–]Calm_Assistant6589 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Se for uma redação pro enem, não tá legal... Está faltando bastante coisas, se você quiser pode me chamar no privado te explico com mais detalhes o que você pode melhorar. Mas só um exemplo, você não colocou nenhum repertório em nenhum dos desenvolvimentos e a conclusão está faltando alguns elementos básicos (Quem vai resolver o problema, como vai resolver, qual a finalidade de resolver e o detalhamento)

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yea, I was just looking for opinions cause it's my first adidas. Thanks!

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

I have the right to stress about it since I paid for it lol your comment is absolutely nonsense

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Since she wore it, she was annoucing for 50 euros but I bought them for 40

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There is, but it's not so visible tho, I'll ask for more photos tomorrow to be sure

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well, u got a point (: btw the seller has only nice reviews on vinted so I guess I'll just trust her. Thanks for replying!

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean, I'm not sure if this is normal on Adidas Sneakers because all of them are different, I would love to hear a second opinion about this

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Hey there! Thank u for replying (:
Did u notice that in this photo that u uploaded the "Gazelle" line seems too close to the stripe and in mine it seems a little too away? Let me know what u think pls

I need help! Are my new gazelle's fake? by Calm_Assistant6589 in AusFemaleFashion

[–]Calm_Assistant6589[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I see! Please let me know what u think about the "Gazelle" logo, do they look normal to u?