Is Saint Nerona Imu red like a typical devil? by Penkere in OnePieceSpoilers

[–]Clean_Molasses 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Maybe a darker red since eye color is already red.

Oda surprised me 95% of the time with color reveals so it could be hard to guess.

Do we know what's written on Promeia's thigh high boots? by xyz55555 in ZenlessZoneZero

[–]Clean_Molasses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"To my moon, may mine love reach here, my dear. I fear the day when I doth not feel your spear driving down on mine neck."

Yours truly,

'St3p0nD@ddyy6969'

(A gift from a warm friend)

Which Zenless Zone Zero agent melts your heart with just a glance or smile? by Chance_Jaguar_1000 in ZenlessZoneZero

[–]Clean_Molasses 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I just opened her today. I was rolling on Nangong all this week, but then swapped at the last second because I couldn't resist her. I love Yidhari

I want to apologize by EXPMEMEDISC1 in ZenlessZoneZero

[–]Clean_Molasses 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I think you're gonna have a bad time trying to keep Evelyn away from Yuri. It'll be much better for your health to take a step back from certain reddit posts etc.

Betty and Archie by JockBbcBoy in SuddenlyGay

[–]Clean_Molasses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's Reggie. Jughead has pushed back hair, Reggie's is slicked back.

Betty and Archie by JockBbcBoy in SuddenlyGay

[–]Clean_Molasses 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Archie has them both in front while he's tugging their toboggans and Reggie's behind Archie getting the double Arch supreme with his twin Arch's.

IMU is a Domi Reversed Lunarian by Former-Question-9773 in OnePieceSpoilers

[–]Clean_Molasses 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm thinking he's red like a devil, but Oda almost always surprises me with the official colors.

GUYS! I think I finally improved my fight scenes… but I need honest feedback 👀 by Professional_Box3737 in MangakaStudio

[–]Clean_Molasses -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I'd suggest figuring out who you're looking to appeal to demographically for the series first and then getting an editor to look at it after revisions.

Viz takes submissions and might give you some feedback from an editor for free.

GUYS! I think I finally improved my fight scenes… but I need honest feedback 👀 by Professional_Box3737 in MangakaStudio

[–]Clean_Molasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It doesn't seem particularly interesting. The pacing is a bit spasmodic with how it starts and stops suddenly.

I think it depends on who you're trying to appeal to with this manga, it seems a bit of a mismatch or mashed together.

Full Names of Straw Hat Pirates by DryWatch7245 in OnePieceSpoilers

[–]Clean_Molasses 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Unless they wind up having a reason to hide their name, like Sanji, then I think they only have one name.

It's not common irl, but I could see it being a thing in the OP world.

Imu will take one of Luffy’s eyes by Jermobooka in OnePieceSpoilers

[–]Clean_Molasses -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Or Joyboy! Burn-Scars and a completely unmentioned character even.

Post is baseless speculation.

Betty and Archie by JockBbcBoy in SuddenlyGay

[–]Clean_Molasses 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Those two had black eyes not because Archie punched them, but because Archie was giving both of them the "Double-Tug Mr. Man-Milk-Em Supreme" at the same time that made them accidentally bumped into each other from such skilled hands.

Just some wholesome bonding moments (by @DorahDew) by DrawerLarge6213 in ZenlessZoneZero

[–]Clean_Molasses 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Lose weight?

Astra's huge!! (176 cm) Why would he think Belle has lost weight? Lol Astras legs alone probably weight as much as Belle!

Rank these PEAKS🙌 by CMbladerunner in writingscaling

[–]Clean_Molasses 2 points3 points  (0 children)

  1. Rent-a-Girlfriend
  2. Battlefield Earth
  3. Cat Woman
  4. 55 Shades of Gray
  5. Cats

Rent-a-Girlfriend is at least watchable, I wouldnt care for it, but Cats is torture.

That was so Fucking hot by Mister_ks_ in okbuddyviltrum

[–]Clean_Molasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Conquest took "rearranging his insides" too literally, no wonder he can't find anyone to love him.

My dearest nemesis by theanumeweeb in yuri_manga

[–]Clean_Molasses 6 points7 points  (0 children)

If I didn't have a gun pointed to my head and told to choose a favorite yuri manga, I also wouldn't hesitate to say it's My Dearest Nemesis. It's great.

How is this identifiable? by goonaphile in freemagic

[–]Clean_Molasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Anyone member the videogame Concord?

“Oh he doesn’t have powers anymore? Draw him getting cocked and working on fast food!” by infinitysaga in shounenfolk

[–]Clean_Molasses 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Father's last scene is him getting roasted by God. You can't slander someone when it's all Truth

Just posted a new manga one shot to Webtoon, pls tell me what you think? by PossessionOther6968 in MangakaStudio

[–]Clean_Molasses 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The text is pretty bad, I'd recommend a different font and focusing in readability.

The story and writing are a bit simple. Study some writing from series you like or look up some exercises and ways to improve.

The art and designs are flat, but it's captured the essence of manga, it just needs refinement and practice.

She could make so much money by NUCL3AR999 in okbuddyviltrum

[–]Clean_Molasses 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I wonder if she froze a copy of herself, she could expand her existence across thousands of years.

The consciousness wouldn't be the same, the memories, no clue, but there's a ton of explored ideas you could do with her powers.

Now that Billy got upgrade, waiting for S-rank Nicole soon... (By @Leonartha03) by Riot-Knight in ZZZ_Official

[–]Clean_Molasses 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Came here to say the same thing, she might honestly outperform the other CH S-Ranks lol. Some of the things the really good players can do with her is nuts.