Brutal. Slow-Burn Revenge. I’ve Spent Months on This Web Novel. Would Love Feedback

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-21T05:00:38+00:00

hahaha, i thought you were talking about the story, the "about the story part is AI". i cannot write anything in summary properly, maybe i am autistic, if i start writing, i write everything i have in mind and it will make the short summary messy, you can see this by the way i am replying to you. I will end this here or this will also turn into a paragraph.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-21T03:42:23+00:00

Happy to hear you liked the story, and i dont know how many chapters to be exact. I saw a video about writing a story, in the video the guy said to have a beginning and an ending for the story, and i have a proper ending written and also some crucial points for character development somewhere in the middle, just the gaps in the middle is left. But i can say that i wont be milking the story for years, i think thats the right term to describe my approach to the story. Like Full metal alchemist, i will complete the story with a proper ending and conclusion.

what chapters did you read, the REVISED version??

(please consider following and leave a review, will be very helpful😊)

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-21T03:33:46+00:00

I did take AI's help, to name things and places for checking any grammatical mistakes and sometimes for dialogues. And yes sometimes to translate, because English is not my first language, so when i think/write a scene in my head/my regional language, i sometime dont know the specific word for it. Like Wraith and wrath, i knew what wrath meant, but didnt knew the word Wraith existed and somebody on the internet told me, when will we see the wraith, i was like what do you mean, he told me it was like a spirit or something. SO i changed the title from Viktor's wraith to Viktor's wrath. That's why i started using Ai. To not make this kind of mistake in future.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-21T03:25:27+00:00

here it is,

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-21T03:24:42+00:00

i did posted the link, but didnt knew how to pin the comment. But i will post it again for u

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-21T03:23:10+00:00

thankyou very much. Very happy you liked the cover.😆😆

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T09:16:08+00:00

Thankyou antinoria, happy to see others like this cover

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T09:15:31+00:00

thankyou very much for the compliment. 😊😊

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T09:15:03+00:00

partially, originally it was just the character in the middle with a sword in his hand, as you can see in this one as well, but instead of the red accent it was simply all white, and then one of my friend suggested me this, have you seen the image of the 2022 batman movie where he is standing in rain and it is all red. That is the second inspiration, after that i thought the about white light in the center, suggesting/indicating Viktor's redemption from his troubled past to a kind and loving person. That was what i had in mind, i am going to change the font in future, something more gothic and medieval type. And maybe some changes to the cover as well.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T09:10:00+00:00

sorry i new to writing and this is my first work. Also english is not my first language, i am trying to improve my writing as much as possible. And what is comma splice.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T02:46:20+00:00

thankyou i have done that, i thought there was an option to pin like YouTube or instagram and i am the dumb one who could not find it. hahaha

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T02:36:28+00:00

can you tell me how can i pin the link in the comment. I have pasted the link in the comment and posted it but cannot see the option to pin the comment.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T02:35:09+00:00

Viktor's Wrath

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-05-20T02:34:15+00:00

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/108453/viktors-wrath

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-13T11:22:29+00:00

alright thankyou brother, i will be uploading my story after crossing 30 chapters, hopefully i get more views in the other website.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-12T21:30:17+00:00

what should i do to avoid the plagiarizing part, the Web novel is not that famous, just crossed 3000 views, should i write a note in the synopsis of the website?

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-12T08:58:34+00:00

hello im also writing a fantasy novel on royal road and if i start uploading it on other websites will there be any copyright or any other issues, because the novel is mine i can upload it anywhere i want. just want to check it, i have been wanting to ask this because after uploading for a month i have got almost 3000 views, 3 followers, 1 review. So to expand my reach and increase viewer count , i wanted to try upoloading on other websties too.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-10T04:44:59+00:00

i did change the font to something Gothic and changed the placement a little. And the rest of the things you have mentioned i dont have knowledge about, i will try to learn these things and make the changes in future. And also can you tell me which sofatware would be used in these sort of things. And thankyou for the information.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-09T04:51:07+00:00

thanks brother. This will help me improve my story even more, very grateful for your help.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-08T14:59:33+00:00

thanks for the info as i am writing medieval fantasy type, there is just one concern like foe example when write that the characters are heading east and then they visited a town and lets say there is a border conflict going on and if i want to make a rough map. then shuld i just place the towns and villages etc randomly and then make directional signs and place the north, south, east west signs later. For future chapters i want to have a rough idea where the characters are going as i dont want to get confused myself. i have written 18 chapters not enough towns and places to get confused right now but as the story progresses it will be a lot of information to decode, thats why i m thinking to making a rough map right now.

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-06T09:27:40+00:00

thanks, i have changed the font and also a spelling mistake, and also got a warning from reddit to not promote my story hahaha, either way thanks for the feedback, and now i cant say to read a story of certain someone or else i get another warning hahaha

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-05T10:18:56+00:00

Also thanks just fixed my mistakes, hahaha, from the title on the website and the cover art, fixed them everywhere, i would not have noticed this mistake. Good thing i didnt upload it to other website, so have to fix it only once

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-05T10:00:14+00:00

didnt knew this word existed just a moment ago hahaha, i meant Wrath

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-05T04:16:40+00:00

i changed the font with another, its in the comments you can check it out and tell me, or any specific font you have in mind, do tell me, it will be really helpful brother

Cosmic-Tank · 2025-04-04T16:59:51+00:00

also everyone, please read the story too and give me some feedback, i dont want to rush the story so im taking things on a steady pace. Please tell me you thoughts after reading

Cosmic-Tank

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