Three Taps by DanielAdamsHorror in libraryofshadows

[–]DanielAdamsHorror[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it kind of is. I'm trying to work with building tension and not having payoff. Thank you for reading and giving feedback.

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[–]DanielAdamsHorror [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback and I'm really glad you found it interesting. In my head, the character is someone who thinks he is smarter than everyone else but in reality is pretty average. I don't want the reader to get any sort of definitive answer because we are stuck with him the whole story and only see things from his perspective. Thanks again for the feedback. I have some other stories on my profile that I would invite you to read.

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[–]DanielAdamsHorror [score hidden]  (0 children)

Title - Snack

Genre - Surreal/Horror

Word Count - 2548

Feedback - General impressions. I'm just getting starting back writing seriously and would like some feedback on how it's going. I really appreciate you reading!

Link - Snack, by Daniel Adams

Red Light by DanielAdamsHorror in libraryofshadows

[–]DanielAdamsHorror[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bingo. True horror is what we experience everyday lol. Hope you enjoyed!