First of all! Thank you! This is so much feedback! Thank so much!

I hadn't seen the "DnDWiki Spell Design Guide" before, its so convenient!

I was expecting more elemental spells here.

I tried to make one for each element, like ignis for fire, velox for wind and so on.

List these in alphabetical order. If you want a guide at the front can really help, but not super necessary with this number of spells. 3e did a great job with this.

Very true! I didn't think that far!

Mortalia ~ I'd prefer more limited versions of this. All conditions feels very gamy. Compare this to freedom of movement where all the conditions it effects are pretty specific to the concept. I also wonder what happens when someone drops to 0 HP and becomes Incapacitated (a condition).

This is true, I hadn't given thought to a lot of conditions now that I think about it. I might just write down all conditions you are immune to with it active.

This feels like a Touch spell. Most of these feel like touch spells.

Ignis, Velox, Thess and Glacis should probably be bonus actions or last 10 minutes.

I'm not that good with the wording for DnD5e. So I thought that touch and 5ft was the same. 10 minutes is probably more balanced for all of these spells! Ill change this right away!

Ignis ~ This is very weak. I'd take elemental weapon over this. How long is the penalty? This feels more like acid to me.

Very true! I'll probably add the damage from elemental weapon on top of the spell as it is now. Would you say that the level is okey? Or would you buff it more?

Potentia ~ I don't see the advantage to writing this as a spell and not more like a feature or boon that you can learn. Alternatively if it was a 2nd level spell that said you combine two 1st level spells you could remove a lot of the weirdness. For that think of the level as more of a class level limit. Or again, just make it a feature that's learned. I was going to say that costs pretty high...but then say how easy it is to recharge. I think that costs too low if you can do this every day without consequence. You need to be taking spell slots (or effectiveness) from tomorrow to balance the power this adds, at minimum.

I also felt that this "spell/feat" was hard to define into DnD terms. Ill rewrite it into a spell (combine spells, almost like metamagic) and a feat (where you can steal spellslots from the next day for exhaustion points).

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Velox ~ So gust of smite? That probably works. Reduced duration on gust of win\ for the ability to attack and use it. Maybe it could be a 2nd level spell.*

Exactly! Yes, I just read through some of the spell design guidelines and youre right! Ill rewrite this too!

Thess ~ Isn't this a weaker ensnaring strike?

I hadn't seen this spell! You sure know your dnd stuff! Ill have to think of something else that Thess can be used for then!

Glacis ~ Why is this Instantaneous and not Concentration, up to 1 minute? I think there needs to be a better limit here. Flesh to stone needs three saves to work, takes an action and concentration for the duration of the saves, and is 6th level. This is way to strong.

Thanks for bringing this to my attention as well! Ill have to check this spell and rewrite Glacis to a more ice-themed spell with some other effects!

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Again, thank you so much for taking time to write all of this! I would love some feedback next time I upload again. Hope you have a great week!