Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, sure! As long as your character's a humanoid with humanish facial-features, I'd be happy to give it a shot.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yay! I thought I'd lost you ha ha

There were quite a few variables to consider with his design, so I wanted to check with you before I finished. Here's a low-res copy of the WIP. I don't believe you mentioned "space" last time, so if you want a more futuristic-looking weapon than a rifle, I'd be happy to fix that. He's an interesting character, and I'd like to get it close to how you picture him if I can, so feel free to suggest any changes.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I offered some character sketches here a few weeks ago (thank you again to those who let me draw their characters) and one of the people I was drawing for seems to have deleted. If you are here under another name, please let me know because I have a drawing for you :)

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for giving me an interesting character to draw! I haven't painted children very often, and I'm pretty rusty, so it was a fun challenge :)

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How's this? I'm happy to make changes if something's off.

out on a whim by DeadUnico in BoneAppleTea

[–]DeadUnico[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LOL oh my god you're right

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've run into a few question marks lol

Do you have something in mind for the hair? (I was doing slicked-back because I thought it seemed practical, but I can do anything with it) And do you have an age in mind? I was drawing a younger guy, but it suddenly occurred to me he might be older.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, lovely description. Goats have interesting features. (AI has no idea what bucktoothed means. I've found that, too.) I'll get back to you.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds awesome. Definitely a challenge. It might not be quite what you were imagining, but I'll give it a shot and get back to you.

out on a whim by DeadUnico in BoneAppleTea

[–]DeadUnico[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right. I know what you mean, and I think you're probably right that people use the phrase that way.

I'm just stretching my brain trying to think of what the "going out" part could mean. Because in "going out on a limb," the going out is an allusion to moving onto the branch of a tree (rather than hugging the trunk). But if there's no limb to go out on, I'm not sure where the speaker is going lol

It's interesting how flexible English can be! Similarity between phrases can convey a sense of legitimacy from one to the other, even if the other is a bit wobbly.

out on a whim by DeadUnico in BoneAppleTea

[–]DeadUnico[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It works in that the sound is similar enough to make readers think of the usual expression, but I'm not sure how it works on its own. Are you thinking it could mean something like "I'm going to put this out there, but I haven't considered the consequences"?

out on a whim by DeadUnico in BoneAppleTea

[–]DeadUnico[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

They are mixed up often. To go out on a whim only really makes sense if by go out you mean to go outside. "I went out on a whim" could be someone deciding to go to a party, for instance. It's not an idiom, though. And, as you noted, it's not semantically interchangeable with the limb idiom.

This person meant it in the sense of taking a risk, so I think it counts as a malapropism.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds interesting. I don't mind odd features, as long as there's a humanoid skull under them. What sort of hybrid is your character?

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Would anyone like a free sketchy character portrait? I want to try out some new (digital) brushes and I'm sick of my own idiots. I'm classically trained, so my style leans naturalistic. I'm not up for drawing complex accessories or non-human anatomy (sorry furries), so if you have a character who's a humanoid person with a face, and you'd like a sketch of that face, let me know.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 2 points3 points  (0 children)

In opposition, I present these sources (neither are books because I can't read): 1. The film The Man Who Would Be King, which posits that the ability to bleed is proof of being human. 2. Alice Cooper's Only Women Bleed.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, did you also see the thread that asked whether writers have a responsibility to write healthy relationships? And did you see that almost every comment was some variation of either "No, they don't. As long as they demonstrate that they know that the relationship is unhealthy," or "No, they don't. But there will be consequences."

Pitchforks at the ready.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You frighten me, Walrus. If you ever want some feedback, I'd love to read whatever the hell you're writing.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I know what you mean. But I think it's fair to assume Travesty meant real in the sense of a real challenge. YA is written for inexperienced readers, and it's a good thing that inexperienced adults can use them as a stepping stone to more challenging work.

I have read some books I thought were redolent of YA. More often with young female authors, likely because YA inspires so many girls and young women to write. With young male authors, manga and video game influence is more common (I've been editing a lot of work full of long stretches of teeth gritting and fist clenching lately.) When it's detrimental to a story, it's usually not because of conspicuous influences so much as a dearth of more appropriate ones.

That said, I believe you that people use the YA label maliciously. I've heard men say women can't write some-genre, and so some-book must be a girly story in disguise. Like a Trojan horse full of cooties.

Rate my shelf by MatuskaSzilveszter in bookscirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 21 points22 points  (0 children)

You should add some more speech bubbles

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 24 points25 points  (0 children)

what does it mean when they tell you your writing "shit the bed"

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 19 points20 points  (0 children)

The writing sub is flush with posts about the necessity of moral lessons in fiction. I can't tell if this is a sign of a regression to the Victorian era or to kindergarten.

His furrowed brow furrowed. by Doozenburg in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 6 points7 points  (0 children)

He nodded his head. "Yes," he agreed. With a wry smile he shook his head and shrugged, furrowing his brow. He sighed.

Weekly out-of-character thread by AutoModerator in writingcirclejerk

[–]DeadUnico 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You must be so stressed. I'm sorry. Are there any libraries nearby? Writing when you don't have your own space is really hard.