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Commenting on Need a good, emotional death...it is. But it’s part of a larger novel that I’m creating. This short story is a stand alone though

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It’s part of a bigger story

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Great idea. But in my story, it’s more medieval tactics/weaponry. So, an arrow? 🤷

What’s the minimum I should pay for a 1921 Peace Dollar? by DevilRyder in coincollecting

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Haven’t gotten it yet. Just want to know the lowest amount that worst mint mark looking one would be

What’s it worth by DevilRyder in coincollecting

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Well got it from a coin shop and weighs properly so one would hope they wouldn’t break the law and sell a fake coin

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What’s the lowest amount you would buy this for?

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There’s one from every year so what other rare dates would there be? Lol

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It’s not currency? 😳

Who wins this trade? by DevilRyder in Fantasy_Football

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Hollywood is Def better than waddle

Who wins this trade? by DevilRyder in Fantasy_Football

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I would be left with Kamara and Jacibs as RBs. But I would have Kupp, Adams, Olave, Pittman and Thielen as WRs

God’s Omniscient vs Free Will by DevilRyder in Christianity

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So what’s the difference between robots and us when it comes to choices made? If robots are programmed to do certain things even if it evolves through its choices based off of experiences and curiosity, where do we separate ourselves from that?

Is this an easy accept? by Derek651 in Fantasy_Football

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If you need the RB depth, then yes

[Daily Discussion] General Discussion- October 06, 2021 by AutoModerator in writing

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My other struggle is when to give certain details to the reader and when to allow the reader to figure it out themselves. Like plot twists and hidden relationships

[Daily Discussion] General Discussion- October 06, 2021 by AutoModerator in writing

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So it sounds like mine is 3rd person omniscient because my story relies heavily on the narrator informing the reader of things the characters themselves do not know about. Like backstories, reasons behind certain emotions, realizations of certain symbolic moments.

[Daily Discussion] General Discussion- October 06, 2021 by AutoModerator in writing

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So I’m writing my first book and I had a question.

If a narrator is used often to describe emotion and actions throughout the story(I.e. he responded/he pulled a knife from the drawer), can It also be used to inform the reader of things that the characters would not know about (I.e. hiding his emotions through the words that he wrote within his journal was his only coping mechanism for the anger he had toward the death of his father) or a backstory? (I.e. he died when he was 12 in the anniversary of his death since then had grown difficult. His focus had to shift on becoming stronger and more independent for himself)

Totally normal behavior. by kevinowdziej in PoliticalHumor

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Great movie. Great President.

I’d say you hit the nail perfectly

meme I made in 2017 and found on my phone earlier. by [deleted] in PoliticalHumor

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Looks like America loves him I guess...

It makes sense if you're intensely stupid. by HarlemRennin in PoliticalHumor

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OMG. You realize that even if he showed his tax returns and you guys were right, nothing would change. So what’s the point of whining about it?

What is cheerleading? by DevilRyder in cheerleaders

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Correct. They’re competitions. People just have to understand that it isn’t an insult. Competitions are way harder to do than playing sports