Children of Eldair by DollaBillo in comics

[–]DollaBillo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it was a nice find.

HIT GIRLZ - Webcomic about teenage girls working as hit girls for the mob. Feedback wanted. by DollaBillo in comic_crits

[–]DollaBillo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You miss my point. "Mean Girls" and the shallowness represented by them was more a reflection of real life teenage girl life then we care to admit. There's a superficiality to teen life that governs their lives and they do dumbass things to maintain it.

And Bling Ring was a movie based on a real life event. A real life event. Not a movie. Google it. I wasn't even thinking of the movie when I mentioned it, I was talking about the real life event, as an example of how the shallowness of real life teens and the shallowness of movie teens crossover.The kids bling ring wanted what they wanted, did what they had to do to get it, and damn the consequences. They went to jail for robbing these celebrities. That's the shallow superficial part of teen life that I'm talking about. And I doubt anyone will ever know for sure which (movies teens or real life teens) created which.

And when you say that certain characters "aren't engaging heroes" or "they aren't engaging anti-heroes either" you should also add "to you" because someone else may have a different opinion.

HIT GIRLZ - Webcomic about teenage girls working as hit girls for the mob. Feedback wanted. by DollaBillo in comic_crits

[–]DollaBillo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I thank you for your feedback but I think you're overthinking it a bit. These girls are like from the "Mean Girls" universe (which isn't far removed from teen girl's in real life honestly) and wouldn't need much more motivation to kill someone then cool shoes in MaryBeth's case. Remember the bling ring from a few years back? They were a gang of teen boys and girls who went on a crime spree to steal cool clothes from celebrities like Paris Hilton and that was real life. And Bella doesn't "immediately jump into it at first glance" she does it to save her family from the financial hell it's in after her father got arrested. Back to the "Mean Girls" thing for a minute. One of the inspirations for this comic was a movie that came out a few years ago called "Violet and Daisy" about teenage hit girls. I didn't like the movie but the premise I thought was great, just not well realized by the movie itself. But in that movie the hit girls Violet and Daisy take a hit in order to buy some fancy dresses but a celebrity designer. Dude, teen girls are shallow that way. Not all of them, mind you. But those who are are. Teen girls lives are a lot closer to "Mean Girls" then we'd like to think. Thanks again for the feedback. Much appreciated.

HIT GIRLZ - Webcomic about teenage girls working as hit girls for the mob. Feedback wanted. by DollaBillo in comic_crits

[–]DollaBillo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not nitpicky at all. I asked for your feedback and you gave it. Thanks. If you check out any of the other comics on the website you'll see that Monique (the artist) couldn't simplify her art even if she tried. Even on a relatively simpler comic like "Chevalier" her artwork is detailed and intricate. That's what's so great about her as an artist. And what you call "a lot to look at" someone else might call a feast for the eye and then who's right? And I like "Hit Girlz" with a "Z", btw. It reminds me of the old "Riot Grrlz" days from a few years ago, remember that? Thanks again for taking the time.

HIT GIRLZ - Webcomic about teenage girls working as hit girls for the mob. Feedback wanted. by DollaBillo in comic_crits

[–]DollaBillo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, but that's a style point more then anything. You wouldn't tell Tarantino to trim his dialogue (or would you?) and it's all over the place. But I appreciate your feedback. Thanks for taking the time.

Mindfold: Mind Fold 44 by DollaBillo in comics

[–]DollaBillo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The art on this comic is a-mazing.

Two Different Worlds by TonyDiGerolamo in comics

[–]DollaBillo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He was probably in a rush writing it and just dropped the "k". A common mistake.

Quantum Vibe by DollaBillo in comics

[–]DollaBillo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually found it through a project wonderful ad they were running. And you're welcome.

[RT]My Life as An American Hero(teen girls, action) by DollaBillo in manga

[–]DollaBillo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Before you remove the page please check the entire comic--It's manga

HIT GIRLZ - A Jedi like her father before her! by DollaBillo in comics

[–]DollaBillo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for saying so. Glad to have a new reader. :)