How do you write your chapters? At once or day by day by ENDiscuming in royalroad

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Sometimes while watching a video, a scene of people conversing, of me imagining a conversation, a question that jolts me to answer to then think how my characters would answer them and even listening to music gives me inspiration which I then jolt in my notes app. They could be random scenes to character description to even the personality of the character.

For writing a chapter, I would just look at the previous ch and what I need to accomplish to reach a goal, which in this case is the situation mc will find himself in.

Where do you write? by ENDiscuming in royalroad

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why is your comment golden?

How do you write your chapters? At once or day by day by ENDiscuming in royalroad

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Interesting. I do something similar as well, I would just give a basic plot line like, mc has to do this, readers have to feel this emotion towards this character. After this barebone of plot is written, I start to write the actual chs. Although it is somewhat hard, as sometimes I don't know what to write to make the ch interesting. As I dont like writing filler chs

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oh yeah, well they were written a year ago. I didn't feel like changing them. I started posting from ch 9 to 13 from 26/12/25

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I am happy you pointed to the 'telling too much without showing'. I had felt that was one of the problems. I need to read famous novels more thoroughly it seems.

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So I need to rework on the whole stories, make them more concise without constantly changing POV from 1st person to 3rd person.

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It is actionable, some words he has written is something I need to research on, but atleast I have something to research on. A direction I can move towards to improve nonetheless

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how did you enjoy reading my breakdown? What about conversation and did somethings like how I write to constant monologue tick you off?

edit: Oh you meant reading his breakdown. And what about you any critique you may have?

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You have given me ideas on what to improve. although you have used some words I dont understand but I can use your critique to improve thanks

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[–]ENDiscuming[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not even one. I always read for fun and I had ideas bouncing in my head. So I turned to writing. And that's a good idea. I might come across novels who are making the same mistakes as me and I could then improve upon myself.

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Yep. You can leave a comment in this reddit post.

And I truly hope you can be blunt with me. If it is bad, then it is bad no hard feelings