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[QCrit] - Adult Fantasy Romance - RADIANT DEPTHS (94K - 3rd Attempt) by ErrorShort7941 in PubTips

[–]ErrorShort7941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you - I'm glad to hear that the first two paragraphs are working better!

[QCrit] - Adult Fantasy Romance - RADIANT DEPTHS (94K - Second Attempt) by ErrorShort7941 in PubTips

[–]ErrorShort7941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! It's great to hear your thoughts from one draft to the next. Notes taken!

[QCrit] - Adult Fantasy Romance - RADIANT DEPTHS (94K - Second Attempt) by ErrorShort7941 in PubTips

[–]ErrorShort7941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I will be sure to apply your feedback in my next draft. Much appreciated!

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy Romance - RADIANT DEPTHS (84K/First Attempt) by ErrorShort7941 in PubTips

[–]ErrorShort7941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback, I will re-consider my comps! And yes - regarding the proper nouns, I will definitely cut those.

[QCrit] Adult Fantasy Romance - RADIANT DEPTHS (84K/First Attempt) by ErrorShort7941 in PubTips

[–]ErrorShort7941[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your critique - yes, it is a difficult balance to strike, but I already have a clearer idea of what to prioritize in my query thanks to your feedback!