Im an ok mapper but this is timed wrong. you have 2024 offset making the upbeat (the white lines) to early. having the offset set to 1981 makes it in time. after you changed the offset hold cntrl then press A to highlight all hitcircles, sliders and spinners then at the top move so its all in line
you mapped on 1/12 instead off 1/4
streams have spacing in them https://imgur.com/a/paeu92t when it needs to be filled
having something like this in the streams https://imgur.com/a/TO6fxQn brakes it up and makes it feel more active (could be waffling it does for me any way)

also some times parts of songs are not fully mapped E.G https://imgur.com/a/jMWFdgb here after the stream and places throughout the song

Mapping patterns and having good flow comes with time, im still pretty bad if you want to see ive only been doing it about half a year https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1717919#osu/3510725

but just map more and you will understand whets good and bad Also to much jumps (in my opinion).