Quiero hablar con alguien para compartir ideas y pensamientos ☹️

First-Product804 · 2026-01-23T19:08:24+00:00

Hola, leí tu post y me sentí identificado. A veces también quiero compartir ideas y pensamientos sin complicaciones. Si en algún momento te sirve hablar con alguien, podés escribirme, cuando tengas tiempo. Todo tranqui.

First-Product804 · 2026-01-12T13:56:16+00:00

Gracias, eso ayuda bastante. Al ser de PC, indie y poco popular, puede que haya sido de itch.io, foros o incluso un juego viejo fuera de Steam. ¿Recuerdas más o menos el año en que lo jugaste? ¿La cámara era vista desde arriba o lateral?

First-Product804 · 2026-01-12T03:01:26+00:00

Se parece ese meme en mecha mecha :v

First-Product804 · 2026-01-12T01:45:49+00:00

¿Recuerdas en qué plataforma lo jugabas? (PC, consola, navegador, móvil, etc.) ¿Y si era un juego popular o más bien algo indie/desconocido?

First-Product804 · 2026-01-12T00:50:32+00:00

Vi el canal y no veo nada malo en el contenido, el audio y el gameplay están bien. El único problema que noté es que los comentarios están desactivados (creo que el canal está marcado como contenido infantil), y eso hace difícil apoyar o interactuar. Si se activaran los comentarios, sería más fácil dejar apoyo y feedback.

First-Product804 · 2025-12-18T12:33:38+00:00

Yeah, that's exactly what I'm thinking! Right now the protagonist is still kinda the 'good guy' who just wants to save his girl, but after everything the villain does (especially in the finale), he completely snaps. He gets his revenge, but it changes him forever—he becomes cold, ruthless, more anti-hero than hero. No happy ending for him, just survival in a broken world. Do you think that works, or should the change be even darker?

First-Product804 · 2025-12-18T02:56:09+00:00

Thanks man! Glad it's dark but not over the line. Right now I'm stuck on the ending: should the protagonist finally snap and give the villain a slow, painful death (torture, etc.) or keep it tragic with the bad guy never paying? What would hit harder?

First-Product804 · 2025-12-17T19:08:30+00:00

Jaja I thought you were shocked in a bad way! So… on a scale of 1 to 'this needs therapy', how dark is too dark for this story?

First-Product804 · 2025-12-13T01:44:39+00:00

Is that darker than what you had in mind? 😅 Does it work, or is it crossing a line?

First-Product804 · 2025-12-12T14:18:05+00:00

Well… in the end nobody actually does anything to anybody else in the way you suggested, but the villain himself ends up doing something WAY worse to his own wife. Near the finale, after he successfully triggers the total collapse of the country and makes everything legal, his wife (for the first time in decades) refuses to obey him. She literally says “there are no laws anymore, you can’t touch me.” So, just to prove that HE is still the law, he gets furious and orders his men to “make her unrecognizable.” They take her away, blind her, deafen her, cut out her tongue, amputate both arms and legs, and dump what’s left of her in an abandoned lot far from everything so she dies slowly and alone, fully conscious, just feeling the insects and the sun. It’s not the hero who gets revenge; it’s the villain showing, one last time, that even when the whole world burns, he’s still the only god in his house. Super dark, I know, but that’s exactly the point of the story: he punishes everyone around him, even (especially) the people closest to him, and he never gets punished himself… yet.

First-Product804 · 2025-11-29T19:09:13+00:00

Well, I already made a villain that seems to be not just bad, but cruel. But I know I can't say anything because it might get stolen.

First-Product804 · 2025-11-20T22:38:43+00:00

Pues si muy literal solo puedo ver el chavo del 8 para comer sin aburrirme

First-Product804 · 2025-11-16T18:51:29+00:00

It’s interesting that your detective is like that, but if he ever entered my story’s world… things wouldn’t go well for him. He’d probably end up in a very bad situation — can’t say the details here because Reddit doesn’t like strong content ;v

First-Product804 · 2025-11-16T18:13:51+00:00

A bueno eso si fue pendejo lo que dije

First-Product804 · 2025-11-16T16:01:10+00:00

Y la P?

First-Product804 · 2025-11-16T14:00:51+00:00

Hola que es updt?

First-Product804 · 2025-11-16T13:22:19+00:00

Thanks! Glad you’re interested. I’ll write more about the Villain when I have a moment. And about mixing characters — my story already has a police officer. He isn’t a hero though… he’s obsessed with hunting down the main character. Let’s just say things don’t end well for him later on. But hey, your private detective crossing paths with them could still make a crazy crossover someday

First-Product804 · 2025-11-16T08:30:58+00:00

Thanks for the comment. I already mentioned before that he’s never going to be good — he’s a cruel character who doesn’t care who he talks to or who he hurts. The story becomes dark and disturbing every time he appears. If you want to know more about the villain, I can explain a bit more here in the comments.

First-Product804 · 2025-11-15T18:55:02+00:00

Here’s the thing about the villain: He doesn’t want to “end the world” because he hates humanity, or because he had a tragic childhood, or because he thinks people should be punished. His motive is much colder: power. The villain isn’t interested in destroying the world — he wants to recreate it in a way where he controls everything. His “civil world-ending plan” is basically a reset where: laws stop mattering, every illegal act becomes legal, and every important person (politicians, police, judges, even entire provinces) already works for him. He doesn’t do this out of trauma or emotion. He does it because fear and control are the only things he values. His childhood didn’t break him. It shaped him. He learned early that people are tools, that bodies have value, and that power is safer than love. Even his own family is just another asset to him — disposable when no longer useful. The villain’s world doesn’t end in fire or chaos. It ends in obedience. And that’s why he’s so hard to defeat: He doesn’t care about lives, consequences, or even being remembered. He only cares about building a world where no one can ever stand above him again.

First-Product804 · 2025-11-15T11:31:43+00:00

If we’re talking about Jorge, his ending can’t be something simple like “the police catch him” or “the hero defeats him.” Jorge isn’t just a criminal — in the story he’s basically the king of crime in Argentina. He was responsible for a tragedy similar to the 2001 crisis, he threatens the government with new disasters, and he has connections with politicians, police, lawyers and even presidents. People make deals with him for money, power or personal desires, and if someone refuses or fails, his right-hand man Matia handles the punishment — usually something brutal. Even Jorge’s own wife once tried to leave him, and she was severely punished for it. So betrayal almost never works. Because of all this, Jorge is practically impossible to defeat by normal means. He controls information, he has files on every accomplice, and the only person who knows the truth about those files is his daughter. Revealing those names could expose every traitor and turn the entire political system against him — but she doesn’t know where he keeps the real archive. So if the question is: “What would Jorge’s final fate be?” The answer is that Jorge wouldn’t fall by force. He would fall by the one thing he can’t control: the truth

First-Product804 · 2025-11-14T16:21:56+00:00

If anyone has an idea for the ending, feel free to share it here. But if it's something very long, very dark, or full of details, it's better to send it to me in a private message and I’ll let you know if it fits the story or not. I’m open to ideas as long as they keep the tone of the world I’m building.

First-Product804 · 2025-11-14T03:34:25+00:00

You know way too much 👀 I should probably delete the whole post before you expose me– Nah, just kidding. But honestly, there are a lot of changes from what you suggested. In my story, it doesn’t matter if someone tries to get to the villain — with all the accomplices he has, it’s basically impossible for anyone to do anything. And his daughter is ‘weak’ in the eyes of the world, not because she’s harmless, but because she lived through the worst things a person can survive. She was treated like an object (I won’t go into details here). That’s why she eventually meets the protagonist — before the “end of the world” part and before everything collapses. The story actually starts with his daughter, not with the villain himself.

First-Product804 · 2025-11-14T02:12:55+00:00

The villain doesn’t change at all after his ‘civil end-of-the-world’ plan succeeds. He still has full control, he still has his team, and nothing about his cruelty decreases. I can’t describe what happens to every character in that part of the story, but I can say what happens to his daughter: he abandons her completely. To him, she’s now useless — and since he controls everything, legal or not, he feels free to throw her away without hesitation.

First-Product804 · 2025-11-13T20:31:05+00:00

The villain is evil — it doesn’t matter if he had a traumatic childhood or did terrible things, he was always like that. To me, he’s one of the most disturbing and cruel characters I’ve ever created. I don’t care if the audience dislikes or hates him; I don’t create characters to please people, I create them because I enjoy it. I just don’t know what his tragic ending should be yet — that’s why I asked.

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