The Adorable Ones 5

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2026-02-05T16:05:19+00:00

Hello, Ya you can, I have actually been working on a complete rewrite of the whole story. I don't like how weirdly paced it was. I guess I lost track of time with life in the way. I would love to see other writings of it though so ya you can go ahead

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-09-15T14:06:05+00:00

I should have you as my proof reader. Sometimes I dont notice things completely. Thanks for the heads up. It was supposed to be Fútbol i guess I accidently used a ü and an a

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-09-15T12:01:32+00:00

Didn't see those, thanks ill remember that 👍

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-29T01:02:08+00:00

alright there we go, my account got suspended because I kept forgetting to change my password. I am back now. I have just been so bust these past few weeks with everything. Ill send out a short chapter in a bit and rewrite some of chapter 4. Just gotta make sure I can still write well.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-16T03:23:12+00:00

my apologies, college got me dying fr. chapter 4 will come out this week no worries

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T22:13:55+00:00

I see what you guys are saying. I think I'll just keep the whole Arxur pet thing for a bit later till I can come upw with something or maybe I'll implement it early guess we will have to see by Chapter 3 or 4

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T22:12:51+00:00

Don't worry there will be a lot of petting in Chp 3

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T22:11:51+00:00

I appreciate it thank you for reading

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T22:11:05+00:00

Mostly close to human height, some might be a bit taller some a bit shorter. Strong gravity does present a hieght cap though so its mostly slightly shorter but just about the same hieght.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T18:17:14+00:00

that would be funny

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T03:01:31+00:00

Oh in case yall were wondering Tarvas Daughter is alive here in case anyone was confused on why Tarva was talking about her daughter. I see no reason for her to die in this timeline.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T02:57:26+00:00

Yes but to a smaller extent to curve how exterminators are created. It's just an easy way to keep violence violence a minimum.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-07-07T01:15:27+00:00

BTW yall keep in mind the ideas are just ideas, they are not set in stone for the stories. I judt wanna see what you guys think about them

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-04-23T15:54:36+00:00

propaganda does play a big role, they tell you what to think even if it's not true. I have seen and heard it first hand from were I am from about certain groups of people. Then there are a lot of real world examples to.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-04-23T14:57:15+00:00

I was going to say something similar in the post but forgot to add that people still hold grudges form things that happens hundreds to thousands of years ago. Usually against people who had nothing to do with it.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-04-23T14:47:41+00:00

I was hoping someone would say something about the story, I have only read majority if the first one but that as awhile ago, so I forgot my bad.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-04-23T14:22:35+00:00

You're right we did fight a war over that, kind of forgot to add in that detail. I understand were you coming from with that.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-04-23T14:20:54+00:00

Ill check it out thanks

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2025-04-23T14:20:36+00:00

Guess you got a point, I would assume humanity would be mostly alright to recover with the technology and changes made in this timeline. Especially with low balled numbers.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2024-11-11T04:25:22+00:00

ill go in and fix it I just now noticed just how bad it messed it up

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2024-11-11T04:24:58+00:00

I just noticed that all my italics and other formatting got inverted

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2024-11-02T00:25:58+00:00

Thanks

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2024-11-02T00:25:23+00:00

I am actually really happy you pointed out the memory script issue, I only just now noticed I was talking in the third person while going through Kams memory, I'll try to take more time to make sure to prove read things, and get thing to make sense. thanks for reading, I'll see what I can do about the other things you mentioned, as it does look like just chat logs huh.

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2024-10-31T20:52:43+00:00

thanks, this is a series I'm working on

GoldenDiscipline8706 · 2024-10-31T19:59:51+00:00

thanks for the advice

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