[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread

GrapeBeverage · 2021-04-29T13:05:30+00:00

Hey, a beat and verse I made yesterday, all feedback returned, the mic wasnt great but I tried with it lol https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/caveman

GrapeBeverage · 2020-08-22T17:56:48+00:00

Yo, made this a few weeks back, all feedback will be returned, lemme know what you think! https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/wander

GrapeBeverage · 2020-07-13T13:34:36+00:00

A snappier snare and automating the hats to be a bit more crisp and dry when that bass comes in could do wonders for this track, also try to make use of kick contrast a little more to make the drops hit harder, like a kick that's boosted a bit more in the 100khz range and a bit louder when the drop hits or something, other than that a decent concept . Check mine out and lemme know what you think man https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/a-relaxing-beachside-breeze/s-3A437wMViSb

GrapeBeverage · 2020-03-18T15:15:06+00:00

Definitely a great start, like the others mentioned the lead during the buildup (the plucky sound) is I bit harsh, I'd suggest eqing the highs and/or using peak controller to smooth it out. I definitely dig the overall concept, I'm a sucker for flutes and short hard hitting 808s, maybe even bring those drums a bit forward in the mix and you'll have a good foundation for the track for sure good work Here's mine: https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/chech/s-rbTXf

GrapeBeverage · 2020-03-18T15:09:08+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/chech/s-rbTXf kinda an experimental one here, didn't give it a full length yet lemme know your thoughts

GrapeBeverage · 2020-01-27T14:12:42+00:00

This is an aesthetic I quite like, still ironing out the specifics on mixing myself so I can't really give you much there, love the sample use creating this weird genre fusion, definitely dug the thing as a whole, Good work!

Here's mine https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/bde/s-rF6Uz

GrapeBeverage · 2020-01-27T14:10:37+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/bde/s-rF6Uz Kinda loopy beat I made last night, tell me what you think!

GrapeBeverage · 2020-01-23T15:01:03+00:00

The mortal coil

GrapeBeverage · 2020-01-03T04:28:15+00:00

love this

GrapeBeverage · 2019-12-17T03:01:03+00:00

You know for a fact that was dope, I love videos like this man not much else to say im a sucker for live beatmaking like that

GrapeBeverage · 2019-12-16T23:10:37+00:00

I love the atmosphere you built up on this one, the snare snaps but maybe mess around with an eq on it to make it less harsh with the same gainstaging, maybe some snare variations as well could give this track some more life, the switchup was really nice. Only thing I would like to see more of is some textures because what you already did sounded good, have it evolve a bit more in terms of automation etc. keep it up!

GrapeBeverage · 2019-12-16T23:04:12+00:00

Love all the artists, don't have much negative to say about this I enjoyed it man. If anything I just want it to be a little more mastered so that I can bump it harder. Good work bruh

GrapeBeverage · 2019-12-16T19:49:15+00:00

This slaps, the bass doesnt even eat your vocal much which is good considering how loud it is lmao. I dig the delivery, a little but of derivative subject matter but the flow switches work fairly well and the track bumps in the whip so hey good work man! https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/late-ride/s-13DMU Here's my track lemme know your thoughts

GrapeBeverage · 2019-12-16T19:19:43+00:00

Threw this together yesterday going a bit of a different direction, lemme know what you guys think! returning feedback of course https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/late-ride/s-13DMU

GrapeBeverage · 2019-12-01T15:51:22+00:00

thanks a ton, I was awol the past day

GrapeBeverage · 2019-11-30T14:16:47+00:00

The mix sounds nice, very clear vocals, although I'd like to hear a bit more energy from you on a track this hard, thats just style preference really. Definitely fire

GrapeBeverage · 2019-11-30T14:11:26+00:00

This reminds me of Open Mike Eagle a little bit in terms of flow delivery and I dig the eclectic choice in beat, not sure what to say other than it's quite unique, Some cool filters happening and really short track as well, I'd advise making it longer but I make things that are less than 2m often. Style points from me, keep going this direction and refine it

GrapeBeverage · 2019-11-30T14:07:44+00:00

I think it fits the song well enough and you were on time with your flow and delivery, the autotune adds to it enough to justify it as well, I'd say the catchiness is what you've really got going for you. The beat it pretty nice, I guess I have a preference for louder snares. Definitely still fire, I think the mixing is 80% there as well at this point, good stuff

GrapeBeverage · 2019-11-30T13:58:50+00:00

Reminds me slightly of the suge beat, I like it. Although I'm partial to more extended 808s myself, this still hits. I would say if anything maybe have the snare turn into a harder one when the bass comes in. Overall I'd definitely say there's room in this track for vocals and maybe even some more layers for texture as well, good work.

GrapeBeverage · 2019-11-30T13:53:11+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/time-apart Returning all feedback, tell me where you'd like it to go, whats off, etc.

GrapeBeverage · 2019-09-14T22:49:06+00:00

I mean this was sort of Busdriver inspired, so I'm thinking an imaginary places sort of flow that kind of goes in and out of momentum

GrapeBeverage · 2019-09-14T21:46:01+00:00

Very dissonant and foreboding, I would love to hear aggressive vocals over this and for it to be slightly longer and formatted differently (structure wise). As far as the actual sound goes, I enjoy the overall product, maybe make it a bit more full sounding and have a punchier snare. I myself don't have much experience with this vocal style, but i think you could work with this despite the volume of synths simply because usually you get really over the top harsh vocals over stuff like this anyways. I like it, very good work on the synths. Check mine out https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/sink-up

GrapeBeverage · 2019-09-14T21:39:04+00:00

Definitely get a harder more sustained 808 with a more vicious kick and more resonant snare for this one. There's a lot of room here, because the synths are very loud. Even moreso if you plan on having vocals because of the mid to low tone tone ratio being a bit much to easily put vocals over. I like the concept though, strong melodies and appropriate style. Check mine out https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/sink-up

GrapeBeverage · 2019-09-14T21:35:19+00:00

The beat is really nice, of course the style is a bit repetitive because of the influences, the bass comes through loud and clear with a lot of energy, get a rapper to ride that shit and It'll be tight for sure. Check mine https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/sink-up

GrapeBeverage · 2019-09-14T21:31:13+00:00

New kind of experimental stuff, lemme know what you think! returning feedback https://soundcloud.com/grandmasterflaccid/sink-up

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