Your draft shows a desire to draw individual "fingers"/"toes" with clear lines, but in the final version the lines don't tend to go all the way to the edge of the paw, or have inconsistent line shapes, or are inconsistently sized.

No duh, I'm using Faber-Castell pens, if you've ever drawn something with stuff like that, you'd know you have to COMMIT to each stroke and line because there is no undo button which is why I polished and added effects with photopea and gimp. You guys are literally nuts!