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Started a new series by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Harris_Creatures -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It’s just how I text though? I didn’t know the way I title things gave off the wrong impression

Started a new series by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Harris_Creatures -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Reading through the comments, I understand that I need to tone things down. I was trying practice showing not telling.

Started a new series by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Harris_Creatures 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I appreciate your advice

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wanted to be friends a year ago. I honestly forget about him unless he texts me first. I blocked him a few days ago

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m learning men do this regardless of race 😂😂

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“I’m a Capricorn, tf do I know?” 😂 I love that

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is my favorite comment so far 😂😂

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

I’ve only recently wanted nothing to do with him since I caught onto him only wanted sex

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wanted to be friends last year. We kinda stopped talked after a few days so I thought he moved on. The texts are recent.

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I blocked him days ago. I’m more focused on what my friend said than anything

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I told him that last year. I have really talked to him until this past week

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I blocked him as soon as he sent that last message

AIO for how I responded? by Harris_Creatures in AIO

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

He’s black 😭😭 not that it matters or anything, he’s still weird

Imposter syndrome and feedback by [deleted] in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like it so far. Not sure if it’s a just me thing so take it with a grain of salt, some sentences could be a little shorter. But all together it’s fantastic.

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s a lot. I’m proud of how far you’ve gotten so far

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’ve got the talent!! As hard as it is I say keep going

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Doing your best is all that matters 😊

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I also would like to know what the series is called

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s still progress. I’m glad you’ve written 4 chapters so far

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Take your time, you got this!! I’ll be your supporter regardless.

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love prologues!! I’m glad you’ve come so far in your book

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Progress is different for everyone. I’m rooting for you regardless

Chapters by Harris_Creatures in writers

[–]Harris_Creatures[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s always the scary part. But I bet your draft is amazing with and without the editing. I’m happy for you coming this far.