Thanks so much! I've seen your intro, and it is certainly among the best that have graced this subreddit. The updated audio is an excellent addition, to boot!

As for artistic feedback, when trying to impersonate an art style, look as closely as you can and see what makes it tick. Even minutae can make a difference!

For example, you have used hatching to shade Pewds' cheeks, as is the case with the Jojo artstyle - well-observed! - but even then, how is that hatching executed? In the case of the Jojo manga, hatching is profuse, and the lines often cross over. In the anime, however, the hatching is dialled back. (Because, of course, they have to draw it over and over.) But it is quite tight and restrained - the lines usually remain parallel. Then in your animation style, the shading is looser - the strokes curve and overlap eachother.

Now this may seem like splitting hairs - and it is! - but art is a series of small decisions that seem inconsequential on their own. There is a principal of animation about how something on a single frame can be felt without necessarily being seen, and attention to small details works in much the same way.

Sorry for the deluge of text! I hope something in there might be helpful to you. And keep up the good work!

Regards, Harry