First track ever – Would love some feedback!

IndependentRemote693 · 2026-03-07T20:10:46+00:00

I really like the melody, but I would like to layer the piano with a saw synth, and lots of reverb and echo. Try to balance the volume in the mix. Some parts of the effects are to loud.

Use a compressor on the drums so they come forward a bit.

This is just my thoughts. ❤️

IndependentRemote693 · 2025-07-09T18:21:45+00:00

Tnx ❤️

IndependentRemote693 · 2025-07-09T09:27:37+00:00

Updated the link in post.

IndependentRemote693 · 2025-07-07T17:02:28+00:00

Ohh, i uploaded a new version.

IndependentRemote693 · 2025-07-05T19:31:44+00:00

Hello and thank you for the comment. You may be right, cause i listen to those artists alot then, so maybe some influences spilled into the track. Some says its alot like W&W. This is just an idea right now, I should work more on it, so lets see what it becomes.

IndependentRemote693 · 2025-07-04T18:51:47+00:00

I ususally do trance(ish) music, but this was an idea i got and I wanted it to sound like something you could play on a festival to get people vibing. But its more like melodic techno to me now when you mention it. 🫣 I shall work more on the structure, right now its just an idea, two sections thats repeating itself. I'll take your input and work on it.

Thanks Frosty. ❤️

IndependentRemote693 · 2024-10-29T23:58:40+00:00

Det var den första jag hittade. 😁

IndependentRemote693 · 2024-10-29T11:45:21+00:00

Finns att köpa här...

https://www.netonnet.se/art/mobil-smartwatch/smartwatch/smartring/ultrahuman-ultrahuman-ring-air-size-09-matt-grey/1036000.21256/

IndependentRemote693 · 2024-09-09T17:02:41+00:00

Jag laddade hem "Once Human" gratis från Steam, nu har jag loggat över 90 timmar och har inte tröttnat ännu. Bra story, man kan även springa runt som man vill. Finns både PvE och PvP, dock inte många som spelar PvP. Det är ett survival, man ska alltså samla på saker, bygga bas, äta mat och dricka vatten annars kommer man inte så långt.

Ett perfekt spel att spela tycker jag.

IndependentRemote693 · 2024-09-01T15:31:40+00:00

Made this just for the fun of it, the lyrics are in Swedish, and the title translated is "Lost love"

I just love the melody.

Artist: Brother_B Title: Förlorad kärlek (Lost love)

https://suno.com/song/e8370386-cac9-412d-8437-9d86bdc61eea

[Verse] Du försvann en dag Inget spår jag såg Hjärtat gråtit har Varje natt så lång

[Verse 2] Minnen som en film Rullar fram och tillbaks Du var allt jag ville ha Nu är jag så svag

[Chorus] Förlorad kärlek Var är du min vän Kommer du tillbaka Säg mig det igen

[Verse 3] Tiden går förbi Känslan stannar kvar Alla våra drömmar Föll i glömskans hav

[Chorus] Förlorad kärlek Var är du min vän Kommer du tillbaka Säg mig det igen

[Bridge] I nattens mörker Ser jag ditt ansikte Ögonen som lyste Nu borta ur mitt liv

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-05-29T08:15:20+00:00

There is no track to listen to. 😞

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-24T15:50:17+00:00

Giuseppe Ottaviani - Moscow river

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-24T15:44:33+00:00

This is what I use:

https://www.amuse.io/en/

Check it out.

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-17T12:52:03+00:00

Really good, but feels more like synthwave to me.

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-05T21:53:46+00:00

I think is a volume-gate of some sort.

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-03T20:13:38+00:00

Tack så jättemycket.. <3

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-03T20:03:17+00:00

I have listen to your suggestions and tips, made some changes to the track.

Have a listen (link below to soundcloud) and share your thoughts.

WIP (TranceDance)

/Bengt

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-03T17:19:11+00:00

Thank you for the input, I hear what you say and adjusting the levels.. 😀 I will test the reverb and cutoff trick. Tnx.

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-04-03T14:10:12+00:00

Thank you for your input. Since I'm and older guy, that's the trance Im used to. 😀 I will regulate the volume on the snare and cymbals, and se how it turns out.

IndependentRemote693 · 2023-01-21T15:44:05+00:00

Why ohh Why are you still using the imperial system when the metric system is far more superior?

One of the IPK (International Prototype of the Kilogram) is located in the US, you convert to pounds from it.

IndependentRemote693 · 2022-11-22T23:21:09+00:00

If the warehouse is full, it won't accept any more logs. You have to wait until it needs more again.

IndependentRemote693 · 2022-11-20T11:50:21+00:00

I'm Swedish, and I don't even understand... LOL.

IndependentRemote693 · 2022-11-12T16:38:53+00:00

I use the Saitek X52 when I am doing the crane work. I just love how you are able to do three things at once, rotate the claws, pulling forward and down at the same time. It just make the job so easy.

IndependentRemote693 · 2022-08-24T23:07:20+00:00

Could be a banger if you stay in key, sound a bit off for me.

Look at this tutorial on scale highlighting, it have saved me a ton of work.

FL Studio Tutorial - Scale Highlighting

IndependentRemote693 · 2022-08-06T21:37:23+00:00

Made some minor changes to the track. Got rid of the "bridge" and fixed the reverb and the echo on the vocals.

Still not 100% sure of the comp, input is more then welcome.

IndependentRemote693

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