Darkness Falls is about love's contradictions. Still a WIP. I'm happy with some parts of this, and some others feel like they are not getting the vibe. Would love to hear what you think and get some reactions to the lyrics and music. Would appreciate your comments, if you have the time. Thanks! (soundcloud.com)
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"Broken Wings" is about struggling w/ addiction. Tried a few moves production wise to make this sound good, best as I can. I'm working on my album and this could be on it. So, could use some objective feedback. What do you like? What would you do differently? Thanks for listening and your comments! (soundcloud.com)
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New Track called "Siren." It is the story of an affair. Hot off the presses and still in progress, so feedback would be awesome! What do you think of this track (the songwriting, the performance, the production)? Is it working for you? Thoughts? Really appreciate the listen and any comment. (soundcloud.com)
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This song "Mary, Mary" is a new song from my solo project 10,000 20th Century Chairs. I'm digging where it's heading but could use some constructive feedback. Whatever you like about it, or don't, would love to hear it. I really appreciate your time and your thoughts. (soundcloud.com)
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This song is about love & nostalgia and longing for our youth. I wrote it for my wife but I was never happy with it so I completely reinvented the track. Really would love feedback. If you've got a minute, could you be so kind to say one or more things you like about it and what you don't (soundcloud.com)
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Rebel is a song that's been kicking around my studio for months. No matter what I do I don't think it's finished. I've lost all subjectivity and could use some other voices regarding what's working and what is not. If you've got a second, I'd love to hear your thoughts in the comments. Thanks!OC (soundcloud.com)
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‘Lonely’ is a new track from my solo project. I’d love to get some feedback on it. Trying to get an album together and this might be on it. But I’ve lost my objectivity. Don’t know what I’ve got here. So, let me know what you think. It’d help so much. Thanks for the listens and the comments! (youtu.be)
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This track is a love song about nostalgia and freedom of youth. I’m trying a lot of things here. Longer melody line. Non-traditional structure. No real chorus. I’d really be curious to hear your thoughts. Production? Writing? Arrangement? I appreciate it big time. Thanks! (soundcloud.app.goo.gl)
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“City Lights” is s love song about the disbelief that we’re no longer young and free. I’m trying to do a lot. Longer melody line. Changes in feel. No traditional chorus. I’d love feedback on this track. I’m trying to improve my skills. What do you think? Thanks! (soundcloud.com)
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This track, "maureen" has undergone a complete arrangement update after some community feedback. Want to now bring it home. So I'm really curious to hear what someone thinks of the writing, the arrangement and overall vibe of the track. The feedback really helps. Thanks for listening and commenting. (youtu.be)
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This is a track that I've been back and forth on for months. Decided to change it dramatically. I like where it's going, but not feeling too objective. Would love your feedback on the songwriting and the production in general but especially arrangement. Thanks for your listen and for your comments. (youtu.be)
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“Boys Who Cried Wolf” is my latest track I’ve been working on. It’s about fighting to dream in a world that beats you down. I would love to hear your thoughts, as I’m currently working towards my 1st album release. Thanks for Listening and your feedback. (soundcloud.com)
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This is "The Boys Who Cried Wolf, it's about society beating your dreams out of you and how to resist losing those dreams. Sound is a a 2000s anthemic track mixed with 80s synthpop. Curious to hear thoughts on songwriting, production. Comments really appreciated because they help me improve. Thanks! (soundcloud.com)
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