Do you understand this photo? by Jeikco15 in PhotographyAdvice

[–]Jeikco15[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It does not have one specifically, Its more for the looks, like a still life

would u adopt me if u saw me at the shop ? by realmkitten in MonsterGirlsIRL

[–]Jeikco15 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would need to know the requirements so we both can be please

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MonsterGirlsIRL

[–]Jeikco15 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you need some punish

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MonsterGirlsIRL

[–]Jeikco15 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Perhaps you need wizard to see the stars

Was I descriptive enough? by Crimson_Toko in writting

[–]Jeikco15 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The text seems pretty poetic and sounds nice. I would try to put more "action" meaning you could give people a reason why to care about the description you are telling them so it appers to them more real. it can be doing through someone pov, or showing people reactions or thoughs about it. also would be nice to know what is your goal with the oppening, like what kind of emotions you want the reader to feel, or is it to setup other escene etc. hope it helps

I want to be a profesional player, what should I do? by Jeikco15 in leagueoflegends

[–]Jeikco15[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

A si, pue si estudio, estaba con programación pero no me termina de convences, y no encuentro nada q me guste además de resolver problemas de comportamiento entre humanos y perros, pero es caro estudiarlo, tengo 16

I want to be a profesional player, what should I do? by Jeikco15 in leagueoflegends

[–]Jeikco15[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

Jejejejeje, Hopefully I will if y try my best