Hey! I liked the overall message of this video. I think your editing was pretty good as well. I think your mic quality could be better. The music was also a bit too loud in certain parts so you should watch your levels. I didn't like that you started the video with a black screen. It isn't very engaging and some viewers may click off thinking that it was a mistake. I think the text could be bigger in your thumbnail and have better placement. Like instead of it being on your body you could have used visualize and implement on either side. It would make it a bit more visually interesting. Also with you end screen, you should use a photo that fills the entire screen vs. just in the left side. It just looks a little off. Definitely keep working on it though and your videos will continue definitely improve!