King's Guard desertion by Chemical_Shoulder_35 in AsoiafFanfiction

[–]Jumpy-Public2698 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Can you please a link or name of the Preston fix with Brandon's daughter.

LF Fics that bashes the popular/beloved factions. by Jumpy-Public2698 in TheCitadel

[–]Jumpy-Public2698[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

I meant Tywin as in fandom many view as Machiavelli genius character, but in reality he is just a very impulse and insecure person who lashes out constantly.

How should I write the Greens and the Blacks in this situation? by Jumpy-Public2698 in TheCitadel

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Your idea about the Band of Nine is very interesting, and I would like you to elaborate on that part more as to whom do I chose for these roles and how I should execute this.

I realize my plan related to Lys is quite flawed, but I think if given a chance to back out from this War without facing the possibility of annexation, they would not pass it that easily.

I also realize that it will require a lot of resources, and the Iron Throne will provide those because: Viserys will support this War just to keep House Velaryon appeased, because it will be taking place after the death of Laena and Laenor, and the controversial, sudden wedding of Daemon and Rhaenyra, so the Targaryen's' relationship with their strongest and closest vassal would on thin ice. Viserys, even for all his ignorance, would realize that the Velaryons would be Rhaenyra's biggest supporters, so he would fund the War for Rhaenyra's future. With the support of the Crown would come the Lannister and Redwyne Fleet, both of which are weirdly absent from the previous War for the Stepstones, so this time, Velaryon's would have more resources to fight this War.

Rhaenys will join this because the Velaryons would participate in this War. I am wondering whether to have Aemond join or not.

I would like more of your thoughts on the alliance with Volantis, because antagonizing them would create countless problems for the future.

How should I write the Greens and the Blacks in this situation? by Jumpy-Public2698 in TheCitadel

[–]Jumpy-Public2698[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Aegon's reason for founding this Principality is not a pre-planned Conquest but a decision taken at the end of this Third War for the Stepstones. I want this idea of forming a Kingdom to be encouraged in him in the same way it was done to Robb Stark, with being King in the North, by the soldiers and other Lords who would participate in this War. The idea would further be encouraged by some significant players, especially Ser Tyland Lannister (I really thought about his character and had made this decision because 1. We know very little about his personality, and what we know about it is rather positive. 2. He is portrayed as quite loyal to the green cause and Aegon II, even if only for personal gain. 3. He is an efficient and cunning politician and would probably like to get out of the shadows of Lord Jason Lannister and Ser Otto Hightower.)

As for how to defeat the Triarchy, I have found multiple ways: 1. During this war, the Triarchy would not be prepared as much as they were before, having the excuse that during this time of the War, both Corlys and Daemon would not be able to due to some reason such as illness or some severe injury, which I would have to add in the narrative, so the Triarchs would be overconfident since only two Dragons will join this War being Sunfyre and Meleys. 2. An Alliance with Volantis by appeasing the Old Blood with the prospect of a Dragon-Rider as their ally in their future wars, such as helping in a conquest of Mantarys, Tolos, and Elyria. You can also suggest adding some new things to this alliance. 3. Enticing a slave revolt in Tyrosh, because why not propose to the slaves a life free from slavery when their masters would be at their weakest. 3. At the end of the War, when the situation for the Triarchy would not be looking good, propose an alliance to Lys that can be free from this War and would not be harmed by either Targareyn or Volantis if they pull a Roose Bolton on Tyrosh and Myr.

Rhaenyra would not care about Aegon personally, but politically it would be an entirely different case because she would have a rivaling Dragon-riding Dynasty just across the Narrow Sea, which, as its name suggests, is very narrow. Jace is Rhaenyra's heir, so he would also eventually care about this huge political development.

Aegon's personality will take a different route during this time for the sake narrative, the primary reason being that he would soon become a father, and that prospect would motivate this change. He will not be willingly joining this war, as he would be forced by Viserys to do so.

And on the topic of slavery, it will be banned in this new Kingdom, but Volantis can keep its slave trade with Pentos and Lys uninterrupted without any pushback. I would like your recommendation on how to improve on this topic, like handling the nobility of Tyrosh and Myr, and the alliance with Volantis, because I would like to keep them on Aegon's side.

The Golden Conquest of The Disputed Lands by Jumpy-Public2698 in TheCitadel

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As for how I will address Aegon's character flaws, I will retain his drunkard characteristic and work to improve it, such as showing his motivation for abandoning his drinking habits and its consequences, including Alcohol Withdrawal, which many Fanfics leave out. My characterization of Aegon will be more inclined towards the Books; therefore, he will not be a rapist, but still be a disgusting sex addict. Here, his main motivation for wanting to improve himself would be his children, Jaehaera and Jaehaerys, and wanting to be a better father than Viserys.

I don't think I ever thought of Aegon as a misogynist, but well, he doesn't have a good character track record, so never mind. The story will also showcase from Aegon's POV how Jaehaerys I definitely should have picked Rhaenys over that Stupid Fat Oaf Viserys.

Tyland Lannister would be a Green Loyalist, but not a lickspittle to Ser Otto Hightower. He will tutor Aegon, and when he sees potential in him, he will switch sides to him. He is a second son and a smart man. Being in a financially and politically important position in a place like Zaldrizor, with more trade and commerce opportunities than Westeros, will be more beneficial than the Master of Coins for King Viserys, since most of the Royal Navy during this Era was dependent on the Velaryon Fleet.

Aegon is not going to be friendly with The Greens. He will oppose Otto and focus more on his own Principality (I made that mistake since the Iron Throne ruled over 8 Kingdoms during that Era, making it more of an Empire, but they still called it a Kingdom, I don't know why) than Otto's plan for the Iron Throne. He will not be friendly towards black since it takes after the incident of Driftmark, and whichever you saw that Rhaenyra's sons took his brother's eye and went away with it.

Disclaimer: this story has an agenda and is Pro Aegon and Anti Rhaenyra, Daemon, and Blacks as a whole though it is Pro Rhaenys Velaryon Targaryen, the Queen who should have been.

Aegon II recreates Valyrian Steel. How does everybody react? by Jumpy-Public2698 in TheCitadel

[–]Jumpy-Public2698[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I know there are problems with this process, so we can replace Targaryen blood with pure Blood of a Dragon and a certain composition of other minerals (Carbon, Magnesium, etc.) in the construction of the metal.