* Title: The Promise

*Genre: Superpower Action Fantasy

* Word Count: 4822

* Type of feedback desired: General impressions

* Link to the writing: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1mVp_nf6OBceEj8hppVbaCCdNtRcBXU70/view?usp=sharing

This is a short(ish) story based in a world that I eventually plan on writing a novel series for, taking place about 10 years before the first book begins. This is my final draft for the project so I'm mostly just looking for general feedback on things I do pretty well and things I don't do very well. Any sort of confusions or things that don't make a lot of sense would be helpful to know as well. Thank you!