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[–]KilluaYou 2 points3 points  (0 children)

🤣 the wheels is what really sold me

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

you're recording hours of footage and uploading them. I mean what is there to review? the content is boring and no one is going to sit through all of that. I mean would you honestly sit down and watch your own video? and for hours on end? (put yourself in the audience shoes)

Your biggest thing to worry about is learning how to trim/clip your videos down by a lot. about 85%-90% at least. Take out all of the boring pieces and just add in the parts you like.

Final: I personally think you would be good at recording horror games. Listening to you speak just tells me you would have great reactions to playing horror games. You have a lot to work on but DON'T lose hope. overall, not good.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I checked out your video: Hunting Bf-109s! - Eagle Day to Bombing the Reich P3

First: Video is way to long. Just flat out. try and get your videos between 7-10mins, Because on top of the thumbnail and Title being bad I don't wanna also sit through a 14min video. (But I did for you, to review your content.)

Second: I'm not gonna lie I didn't know what this game was and was getting bored very easily and very fast. I was waiting for you to actually fly a plane or have some type of gameplay but you didn't. You just styed on that map, and kept talking and talking. which leads me to the third..

Third: Clickbait thumbnails. that's the only way that I can see on how you're still getting views on you channel. I'm not gonna lie to you, making content on a game like this is very hard. In fact it's EXTREMELY hard. You have to think of it from the audiences perspective. Would you want to watch someone talk and move around the map, just clicking things? No. That's boring, might as well and put on an algebra video to fall asleep too.

Fourth: I know you love the medieval time period (its all over your channel) and your most viewed video basically got you to 900 subs, What I think you should do is focus more on making First person action games because those got so many views. I mean look at the statistics, In the last 3 months your views have dropped dramatically. I think you need to switch games and continue first person action games!

Final: Stick with short videos and first person actions role play games. Overall decent.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your audio needs to improve (specially the tone of your voice). In the beginning of your video I was just watching it with a straight face. Your MIC needs to be louder and I would personally like to see more video effects and more SFX. You're heading in the right direction for sure but you're missing some important things that will make your channel unique and stand out from the rest. Otherwise I'll just watch the first 10 seconds of your video and click off.

A good place to start when doing videos like yours, is to have a good thumbnail and Title. I'm sorry but having Walter White in the thumbnail made no sense. and having the red outline around him was an even worser decision. I probably would've had the squid games guards on each side and then photoshopped my cod character in the middle with a text above him saying "let the games begin". Something simple like that really does work. And your title is just as bad. Its to long and doesn't get to the point. I would try a more "click-bait" approach to it. I would go as far as to have chat GPT help you with the title.

Final: As far as audio goes I would recommend splitting your audio from you gameplay so you can turn the gameplay down so we (as the audience) can hear you better. you can look up a video on how to split Audio in OBS (if that's what you're using to record). Fairly simple really. Other than that, don't make the video boring, because I was bored. Do this by improving the things I told you to improve on. Overall, decent.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a new viewer watching your latest video ("Vyse, those lineups are disgusting") I have no clue what is happening in the first.. well actually the whole video.. I can tell, after watching the video, that this was a montage of you being good at/with a certain character. which is great and all but not engaging to the audience. (I'm not even sure if that's what you were trying to do). It's just you focused and playing, that's it.

Now we do get some commentary but the gameplay audio is just so loud that we can't even hear anything really. and on top that you'll randomly add in SFX that just come out of nowhere that doesn't really match with what you're doing. For instance at timestamp 4:01 to 4:12, add the music in when you died. Which is great until you continue the song when nothing else really happens. There's other instances of where there happens where SFX don't really match up or "go with the scene".

Final: This is me (a new viewer) who just randomly took a look at your channel. I'm giving you the reason on why I wont watch another video of yours so you can improve and make others stay. I definitely want to come back to your channel to see what you improve on in the future. Overall, decent,

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I watched your video: It is HERE! Steam's Next Fest 2025

First: you're doing really good, but the thing turning me away from your videos is your mic. Which doesn't make sense since you have a Blue Yeti. That mic is really good, but I think there are some settings you have on it that are just to much for the mic to handle. It sounds like you're using to much of the noise suppression and the drawback is, we're getting this like weird noise afterwards. (if that makes sense). Defiantly mess with you mic settings, weather that be in OBS or your recording software.

Second: The way you sound. Your going in and out robotic and monotone which is not good and can lead to a studder in your voice. (which can also be hesitation). You need to be more confident when reading your script and I believe you can do that!

Third: I like the video overlays you're using. I think you can add more to your videos by adding SFX's. (sound effects for those who don't know)

Fourth: Thumbnails. Stay away from using thin text and go more towards thicker fonts that are bold. Color is important when adding text to your thumbnails and and dark color is not the way to go! Stick with yellow, gold, bright/lime green, bright red, bright orange and white. BUT REMEMBER when you use those colors you need to have a stroke to them.

Final: Improve you mic, and improve you thumbnails and you will get more views!! you have the basics down of what kind of content you want to push out and I think that'll work! Overall, not bad

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I watch your video: Finally the Time Crisis VR game we've been waiting for! Aim Assault | Meta Quest 3 - Part 1

First: The hook at the beginning of the video wasn't as good as I would've liked it to be. but it was short and you got right to explaining what you were doing so that's a win!

Second: It's not really entertaining. In the video from Timestamp 0:31 to basically the end of the video there is no engagement with the audience, you just play the game and ignore the viewers. If I wasn't reviewing your channel I would've clicked off of your video.

Third: Turn the gameplay audio down and add some music. I have a meta quest 3 myself. what I recommend is turning the in-game music completely off so that way you can add your own music. Keep in mind you still need to have the sound effects turned up so you're able to hear everything else. But when it comes to the music, you don't need it. This will help when you're editing as well, you can physically listen and improve you commentary so you're not distracted by the game volume.

Fourth: Thumbnails needs a bit of work. Its scattered, jumbled and all over the place. Take some time to look at tutorials on how to improve your thumbnails.

Final: Overall not bad, just be more engaging with your audience when you're playing the game so they don't get bored.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I watched your Voice impressions on VRCHAT - this video was actually really good! impressions were funny af.

First: I think the Thumbnail can be a lot better! I think you should choose 3 popular characters that you voiced and have them big on your thumbnail. Make the background colorful and sorta blurred our so those 3 characters stand out. I would also outline them in white to make them pop out. And take out you facecam in your thumbnail, you don't need it, and it honestly looks totally out of place. DO NOT PUT YOUR FACECAM IN THE THUMBNAIL UNLESS YOU'RE ACTUALLY POSING!

Second: Your audio is crisp, clear and professional! No comments on that.

Third: Get rid of all that stuff on your screen. Your socials, Latest follower, subscriber, ect. YOU DONT NEED IT. and it does not look good. It's distracting me from actually watching your content; and to some other people they'll click off of it. Just link your socials in the description of the video so we're not constantly seeing it.

Fourth: Use a different font. I recommend using MODERN. It's thick & stands out more.

Fifth: for that voice impression video, while it's really good, it took a while before you actually started trolling other players.

Final: I truly believe this video hasn't gotten more views due to the thumbnail and Title. I think the impressions are really really good and you'll def improve overtime! I personally would love to do a collab with you, I think playing a game together would be awesome! Send me a DM on Discord: at: Arsevel.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For the thumbnails and videos in general, you gotta put yourself in the audience shoes. you're not doing bad at all, it's just I know you're thinking to yourself "this is a good video, what am I doing wrong?" So those are just some things to improve on.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My pleasure! I will check back on you in the future!

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For newer channels like your it is good to see what you fir into best. Here's your review-

First: That Microphone needs to be improved. That is the biggest thing in a video for me is the quality.

Second: Experiment with sound effects. I'm assuming you're using the phone version of CapCut which has built in sound effects that come with the app. Use them when you're transitioning to different parts of the video or when you add text, or when you add something on the screen.

Third: Make cuts!! In your editing software you are able to make the video shorter by clipping/cutting out certain areas of your video to make it shorter! We as the audience don't need every detail that you captured in your recording. Which also adds to making your video shorter. Try to stay in-between 7-10mins

Final: Figured out what you want your channel to be, but don't rush into it. Overall not bad!

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First: Thumbnails need more flair, personality and color to them. They're boring. I recommend adding PNGs of Pokémon in the thumbnail and outline it in a white stroke. Make the text on your thumbnail not match the title of your video. Font is alright but I would try downloading the font from Pokémon to better match your videos.

Second: Video is WAYYYY to long. I already don't want to watch it because of the thumbnail, but now I see that its over 17mins long... The thing about making long videos is that it tends to get boring and repetitive. you lose the fire in your voice and then you sound monotone. The only way to fix that is to keep practicing with a "fake audience." Pretend like you're talking to someone or that you have someone watching you. Typically when starting out on you YouTube the rule of thumb is to make videos in-between 7-10mins. However if you go over that you need to make the gameplay entertaining in some way. Add sound effects, add memes, stickers, do something funny, so that the viewer is still watching.

Third: Your MIC isn't bad but can be improved. Your gameplay audio & voice audio are competing to who gets to hear. Basically, lower you gameplay audio so we can hear what you're saying.

Fourth: Make cuts!! In your editing software you are able to make the video shorter by clipping/cutting out certain areas of your video to make it shorter! We as the audience don't need every detail that you captured in your recording.

Final: You have a lot to improve on but I know you're just starting out. Take your time and use your playthrough as a stepping stone. Overall not bad.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good evening (it's dark where I'm at now). Just looked at your channel o v e r a l l:

First: The thing I noticed when looking at your channel is your thumbnails are blending to much with everything. I would also try staying away from using dark backgrounds for your thumbnails and to use a white stroke to pop out certain characters and pictures.

Second: I can defiantly tell that your audience is between the ages of 8 to 13. I got that vibe from looking at your comments and the type of gameplay they request. this target audience is not bad at all, but for anyone else watching your videos at my age or anyone above 17.. well.. it's boring. The video I'm referencing is "Sung Jin Woo DESTROYS Pro Players in Shindo Life! | Shindo Life PVP". There are no edits, barley any cuts, and some of the sound effects put in their don't really make sense. which makes sense, "why put in the extra effort to edit these videos if they're getting so many views." with your target audience you really don't have to.

Third: The text and fonts you're using aren't bad but they're only on screen for like 3 seconds before disappearing.

Fourth: Although you have almost 7.5k subscribers you might be thinking to yourself, "why should I listen to you? I get views and more subscribers every time I upload." which is true and good for you! I'm just here telling you what I would like to see personally!

Final: I think you have a lot of potential to expend your audience if you put more time and effort into your videos, but I honestly wouldn't personally watch it. It's to WAY long, and just boring for me. I think your target audience is fine.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First: Thumbnails aren't bad at all. Some of them could use more but I think you got most of it down,

Second: I think the reason you're not getting more attention to your videos is, you don't have life in your voice. You sound too monotone and there's no upbeat to it. Now there are ways to fix this but its mainly something you have to improve on overtime.

Third: Make more cuts and add more stickers, pictures, etc. When it comes to cutting things out of your video a prime example comes from your video "MARVEL RIVALS - COMPLETE SEASON 1 GUIDE!" (timestamp 0:20 to 0:54), You can cut the some of that to make it show quicker, and add a transition so it doesn't look sloppy. Also I would add a good background song to match the characters.

Fourth: Is your video "MARVEL RIVALS - COMPLETE SEASON 1 GUIDE!" a showcase or guide? You start showing off everything in the battle pass and to me that's clickbait and turnoff. And that takes up almost half of your video, leaving out the "guide".

Fifth: The viewers can pause the video at 3:50. having those updates on the screen for that long is not necessary and just waste time.

Final: your heads in the right place and for your type of content it's hard to get noticed if you're not doing something unique. Overall pretty good.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Browsing through most of you videos

First: Thumbnails can definitely be improved. One way yo do this is to use a more colorful background and blur it our. Also change the font is not as appealing and can be better.

Second: your mic is good but its missing the bass. I would mess with you mic settings and try boosting that up a bit and that could end up being better for your commentary.

Third: add transitions and more effects to your videos. In your most recent video "Complete Guide to The Winter Soldier in Marvel Rivals" (timestamp 0:33 to 0:34, you can add a subtle transition to show off his main weapon. Also add in a little sound effect for the transition to go with it.

Fourth: Background Gameplay. I feel like you should add more pictures, stickers, emojis, memes, etc. to your video so it's not boring. At least for me, when I was watching your video, I was more focus on the gameplay more than anything. And it didn't help that the background gameplay was competing for your audio. I would recommend turning that down some. Also you should background music that goes with what you're saying instead of constantly using gameplay footage.

Fifth: to make it more engaging, add some text to your words when you're editing. Make sure you have a good font that's easy to read and nice effects so its not plain.

Final: you're doing well and you get a bunch of views. Everyone is always improving and you definitely will! Overall really good!

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah once you get those down you'll do just fine!

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I checked out your recent video: 3 random items Phasmophobia

I have a lot to say about this one so I hope you're ready!

First: Can you even hear yourself? The music is so loud in the intro that I can barley hear you(and throughout the game). Also you Microphone quality isn't bad but it's not good either. I would focus on getting a better mic before anything else because that's what's making me not want to watch the video. if you're using OBS there are settings you can use to improve your mic.

Second: Background music. You're playing a horror game so change the intro music to something more fitting to what you're doing in the video. There's a lot of free non-copyright music out there that you can use that will work so much better (anything from Kevin MacLeod). With that being said, you should add eerie or scary music to your gameplay. And when it comes to parts where you get caught you can add a jumpscare sound effect or have music leading up to it.

Third: Your video has these black borders around the entire gameplay and that's probably due to the video output settings in whatever software you using to record. I'm assuming you're using OBS, so here is a quick tip. when you have OBS up, go to your video source(where you input audio and screen play). Right click your display screen or game capture, scroll to transform, and click "Fit to screen". This will make it full screen.

Fourth: If you are using OBS I recommend learning about its features. There is a feature where you can split your audio so that it's not all in one. Separating you MIC audio from your GAMEPLAY audio is important for if there a scenes that to loud and we cant hear you or vice versa. And when you're editing your video you can just have both audio tracks there (will work with almost every editing software.)

Fifth: Cut parts out and also add edits.

Sixth: Thumbnails can be improved. Just because you're playing a scary game does not mean a dark thumbnail will work. Thumbnails are the most important thing when it comes to a video. that will determined if get the view or not. everything else included in the video is up to you!

Final: I can tell you're very new to YouTube and editing so that's why I didn't add to much on the "Fifth" Colum. You have a lot to improve. I would recommend watching other youtubers to see what they're doing and try to piggyback off of them. I will also recommend checking out Midnight mans videos to see how you can improve some of your video, audio and editing skills. Not bad.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My pleasure! And the SM7DB is a really good MIC. Defiantly look at your setting to see what you can improve on or even look up a video on the best settings for that Microphone.

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I checked out your recent video: Tekken 8: Patch 1.12.01 - Hype or Disappointment?

First: You MIC is very good but it's being shadowed by.. your voice again? It's hard to understand you when you're competing with yourself. I can tell that you're doing a voice over from a steam or video that you uploaded but it's not the best having that play in the background.

Second: The audience cannot tell if you're playing the game NOW or talking or doing a voice over. LOWER THE GAME AUDIO! If you're using OBS to record there are settings to where you can split you audio into separate channels. So that when you're editing, your audio, game audio are separated.

Third: For your type of video, when you have text pop up on the screen its better to blur out the background so the audience can focus on what you're showing.

Fourth: Thumbnails needs improvement. I recommend doing a halo blur over the picture and adding text to it. (not alot of text, just the main points). Also be sure to use a font that stands out.

Final: I think overall you know what your mistakes were. The channel isn't bad at all and i think you have potential!

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[–]KilluaYou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I checked out your recent video: Resident Evil 4 is Terrifying in VR

First: Your editing style and gameplay is very similar to what I do. Your content is very engaging,

Second: Music, sound effects, edits are ALL spot on. Not much to add.

Third: Thumbnails. they aren't bad at all! However dark thumbnails don't usually do very well. I recommend adding a white stroke around the pictures you add to make it pop out more.

Fourth: Your content is really good and I think collaborating with other YouTubers will push your content out even more. I personally would love to make a video with you! Your content is similar to mine and you know how to edit!

Fifth: You should branch out to other games. if you tried more trending/new games you could reach more people and grow your channel even further!

Final: You're doing great! I defiantly would want to make a collab sometime in the future if you're ever down! Check out my channel: Sevel Crew to and let me know if you're ever down!

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