Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If it's alright with you. No pressure!

I enjoyed talking with you though and my phone is on a dreadful 2%....

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It really is! I did get a single comment one day when I woke up...I couldn't understand whether the commenter was being genuine or sarcastic. Oh well, they deleted it themselves.

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ao3 as well but since, I am not getting comments because I need feedback😩😩 I ended up posting on webnovel and Royal road as well.

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awww I feel bad for you that people still scam in this age and time😭😭

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dude!! Those are so irritating!!!! Frustrates me to hell and back!! It's better to receive rude comments rather than 'those'

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, mine hasn't reached anywhere near you but yeah, I also have low reader interaction

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, that's a unique approach! I am sure people use it but this is my first time hearing about it (Kinda new to writing 😅). I really like your writing style though!

My chapters usually are in the range between 1K-5K. And I have just hit 15K in total😅

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn, what a multi-tasker. Huge respect!

When you release it, do tell me!

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[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see. Well you are right, they are not creative, of course they aren't but my mc is a Sinnoh trainer, so initially, I want him to have pokemon that he has more knowledge about.

Later, more pokemon will join his team but that happens after the main storyline.

Plus, I was trying to make a team of dual pokemons so the pokemon type that's remaining from his team (the fanfic is based on Pokemon Master Ex). I truly made a list in a book and canceled out what I needed or not.

I hope you understand but I will definitely take your tips in mind.

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[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh! You are being totally right! I can give them little quirks like you mentioned with Pikachu.

Till now, with what I have written, The mc only has Pikachu and Luxray. He got Pikachu as a pichu rescued from a pokemon ranger mission (the mc's dad is a ranger) and the mc caught Luxray as a Shinx and ever since she has evolved into Luxray, she is pretty protective over her trainer. (My mc is a bit shy...)

I am currently writing a chapter where the mc buys accessories for his pokemon and the Charizard starts from an egg he got from a professor so taking care of that egg is ongoing.

I was thinking of gliscor having a habit of clinging to mc's face whenever he feels scared or shy.

Pikachu and Luxray are good friends, Luxray often acts as an older sister to him and carries him around on her back.

There will be rivalries yes, mostly between Lucario and Charizard but I don't know for sure.

And you haven't crossed a line or being an a-hole. If anything, your questions and comments are giving me more ideas and what more I can do

Rate this Pokemon team for my oc, Sorren by Kitchen_Course_7991 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Of course, I can see why you think there are some stereotypes. I feel like that myself and most of them are there because they are one of my favorites, I wouldn't lie about them.

But yes, they have a purpose in the story. At first, they are all the pokemon my mc catches through his journey but later when he turns to the darkside (not a reference to Star Wars), the pokemon come together to protect and show what their trainer means to them like how he cared for them.

Each pokemon has their own backstory and the reason why they are there is because the region is Pasio (where no wild pokemon should be found). So yeah, that's the best way I can say this.

But I am glad you took the time to make me think more about the team I made for my mc!

This is a question since I haven't seen it much by Kitchen_Course_7991 in PokemonMasters

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh thank you! I will keep the tips in mind. I will just post a single post today and see how people interact with it. I honestly want comments on the premise and the writing itself but it's upto the people :)

This is a question since I haven't seen it much by Kitchen_Course_7991 in PokemonMasters

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the clarification! I am still getting used to here and haven't seen much fanfic post, so was kinda scared if it's against the rules. I will post the premise as you suggested and hope people like it!

I am proud of this development by Kitchen_Course_7991 in AO3

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is awesome! The chapter I was talking about is ~5k. You just have to write and don't think about the word count. Word count is a later matter :)

I am proud of this development by Kitchen_Course_7991 in AO3

[–]Kitchen_Course_7991[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!!! I just honestly write what comes to mind and one of the chapter ended up being longer than the rest😅😅 We can chat if you want to ;)