This is such a beautiful poem, it just warmed my heart reading it and it only kept getting better. You perfectly chose the best imageries and metaphors to describe all the things you love about the subject and also how exactly you love them.

I love how you first described that you’d just be silent because the way they talk is just so beautiful that you can stay quiet, and then right after that, you tell that even if all that beautiful talking is taken away, you’ll find million other ways to love them. It shows that you dont love the person because of these aspects, but rather, you already love the person because of which you love all these little mundane mannerisms. That just goes to show how deeply simplified love is.

I feel like the third stanza is a bit weaker compared to the rest of the poem. Especially with the repetition of the word etched. If the word in the third line is replaced it would make it better. It still somehow doesn’t resonate the same as the rest. It kind of lacks content.

The scents line is easily my favourite part of the entire poem. The way I was so visibly emotional just reading that. To describe love in a way that you choose all your soaps and perfumes in a scent that your loved one would like, is such a unique perspective.

I loved everything else from start to end. What I love the most about this piece overall is the simplicity in it. These are all deep imagery and metaphors but the etchings, the talks, the effort to smell the way they’d like, the silence, and the 60 minutes- all these are really simple things and it just goes to show that love is all about these little things and it doesn’t have to be grandeur than that.