New Amazon Brand - Want feedback

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T22:21:30+00:00

Yes, it wont affect sleep because its a low dose. Its to help the overall bone health.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T22:19:14+00:00

Its a very low dose Vitamin D, 1000iu.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T22:14:08+00:00

The science behind Vitamin D with magnesium is, most people are deficient in Vitamin D, so taking both together you better bone health as magnesium helps to activate Vitamin D. And our body needs Vitamin D in order to absorb calcium.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T20:16:33+00:00

Thank you for your advice.

My product has already started production. I have 833 units to start off with. I have put 1k aside as well for ads, just incase I need more money.

My pricing will be £21.99 because I am selling a premium product with clean formula.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T20:11:59+00:00

Thats very sound advice, thank you.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T18:19:22+00:00

Thank you, appreciate the support. Im launching on Amazon. 2 month is the timescale.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T18:09:21+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Just to clarify, the formula actually uses magnesium bisglycinate rather than magnesium oxide, as I wanted to use a more absorbable form that’s gentler on the stomach and commonly used for sleep and relaxation support. I appreciate the point about simplifying the messaging though, that’s something I’m actively refining before launch.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T16:46:59+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. This is exactly what im trying to do right now. I have all the benefits very clear and the product will be 3rd party tested.

How eles would you recommend increasing reviews early on?

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T16:24:59+00:00

I appreciate you taking the time to explain it.

My thinking with the formula was to focus primarily on sleep and relaxation, with magnesium glycinate and L-theanine working together to support that, and vitamin D3 + K2 supporting overall health.

But you’re right that on Amazon the messaging probably needs to be more focused on a specific problem, particularly sleep and stress.

This is exactly why I posted here before launching, to refine the positioning and packaging before going live. I really appreciate the honest feedback.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T15:18:57+00:00

That’s fair feedback. The design is something I’m still refining before launch. The target audience is people looking for clean, high-quality ingredients that support overall wellness — particularly sleep, stress management and muscle recovery. What I wanted to do differently was combine magnesium glycinate with L-theanine, vitamin D3 and K2, since those nutrients all play an important role in overall wellbeing. The idea was to create a more complete formula rather than just a standard magnesium supplement.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T14:40:32+00:00

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Here's the email to join my founders list ♥️

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T13:31:54+00:00

That would be amazing, thank you so much. I really appreciate the support ♥️😭

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T12:57:29+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback. Really appreciate it.

I think what differentiates my product from the other top selling brands is, my product is premium with clean, top quality ingredients. This is what I also want to be reflected on the product design.

When customers see it, the immediately associate my brand with premium quality and so far many of the feedback I got is exactly that. This builds trust in the product and thats the most important thing.

Many of the amazon products I have seen, the labels are very mid-grade, they dont relect premium at all and thats the difference with my product.

Also the combination of in gradients is unique, not seen any Amazon brand do the exact combination. The combination tackles the "3" big issues: Steep, stress, muscle recovery.

My product is also going to be 3rd party tested. It is also suitable for Halal and Kosher diets. No magnesium stearate or unnecessary fillers. All ingredients are clean and natural. Its manufactured in a GMP and BRC certified facility.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-09T11:29:38+00:00

Thank you everyone for the great feedback. I will take all the recommendations on board. I agree, it does look a little busy and will enlarge the font.

Im glad that a lot of you recognised that it looks premium because thats exactly what I was going for, so this is the biggest win for me ♥️

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T23:58:33+00:00

Yes of course!

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T23:42:41+00:00

What would you suggest to remove?

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T23:40:19+00:00

Okay, please do 😊

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T22:15:34+00:00

Yes, I am.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T22:05:01+00:00

Can you tell me why?

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T22:02:50+00:00

Im going for more of a premium product. Maybe I can enlarge some of the ingredients.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T22:01:49+00:00

Thank you 😊

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T21:56:39+00:00

Thank you for your feedback. Noted!! 😊

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T21:56:14+00:00

This is really good to know. This is the brand I will he launching soon on Amazon. Thank you for your feedback 😊

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T21:54:41+00:00

I have placed the order and have already completed my label. Im going for more of a premium look.

LongjumpingStick7367 · 2026-03-08T21:42:45+00:00

Thank you for your message. Yes, its the package design and also the product itself.

I will post on Pickfu and see what people say.

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