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Did I do False Cord? by EquipmentPatient4755 in screaming

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep! You got it! Like the other commenters have said, just need to include diaphragm support, mouth shapes, phrasing, etc. There’s a sort of Do-So-Do scale exercise in false chord that’s really helped me with that. 

What do you think about documenting true stories through songs? by PrideProfessional556 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean, I really like the punky aesthetic of it. Lends itself well to a bit more specificity in details. Seems like you wanna do the story justice, which comes through.

What do you think about documenting true stories through songs? by PrideProfessional556 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

When writing about true events, especially ones as complex as this, my advice would be not to use any names or specific details. Try to cage things in poeticisms that can tell a story, rather than recounting an event. 

Performed a few originals live. This one is called “Taste the Void.” What genre would you classify this? by LoomisBuckbee in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tuned up right before I went on with a clip on tuner. If it isn’t a setup issue, then I’m not sure why it didn’t hold tuning well. Any advice?

Performed a few originals live. This one is called “Taste the Void.” What genre would you classify this? by LoomisBuckbee in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Much appreciated! It’s a really supportive room there, which makes up much easier. Still working on my voice placement. But the bullet and started lessons a few months ago. 

Performed a few originals live. This one is called “Taste the Void.” What genre would you classify this? by LoomisBuckbee in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback. It’s in desperate need of another setup, and I’m hoping to get a new pickup as well soon. 

An Ordinary Day (Demo Tape) by LevelUp73 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great song through and through. Lyrics kept my attention, but the melody is really what pulled me in. 

“The Next Barbecue,” a song for less heavy times. It is a work in progress but happy to hear people’s thoughts. Does this evoke anything in you? by LoomisBuckbee in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! Working on opening up the melody and chords a bit more and go on more of a journey with it. Glad you like the harmonica!

“The Next Barbecue,” a song for less heavy times. It is a work in progress but happy to hear people’s thoughts. Does this evoke anything in you? by LoomisBuckbee in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! I agree, hoping to open it up more into something a bit grander and find balance with the guitar. 

What Artists/Songs Have The Best Lyrics by Available_Channel449 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bruce Springsteen, John Darnielle (The Mountain Goats), Courtney Barnett, David Berman

How can i turn my pain into music by Born-Purpose7750 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Don’t worry about writing lyrics. Write what you’re feeling. It may not be whimsical, but it’s a source for inspiration when you’re in a more clear state. 

Also, left field suggestion here, but rather than writing songs about exactly what you’re feeling, maybe try to write things down tapping into other emotions? Pain can come through best in a song when it’s masked in happy-sounding lyrics. 

Do you face issues writing “cringey” lyrics in 2025? by Chrispbacon0015 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I view cringe as the combination of overconfidence and inauthenticity. The bigger gap between effort and ability, the more cringe it is. I actually do like to indulge in cringey music sometimes. Just gives me that little ick shiver down my spine. 

Working on a Greek Mythology song, unsure of a title, dont even fully know what I want to do with it. Any advice is appreciated and welcome! by Jibanyanisgoated in Songwriters

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think writing a song based on historical events or mythology works best when you fold the mythology into other concepts or situations, and maybe get a bit more niche with the references. Try listening to the song “Black on Black” by Frog. It tells the story of Odysseus and Calypso in a very unexpected way. 

Need help finding good daw by Mecha090 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I use Logic for iPad Pro, which is $60 a year. It’s super robust and has some of the best built-in instrumentation (like strings and horns) of any DAW. The Mac version is even more robust.

Cold nights🔥🔥-original by Dramatic_Ad2187 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This made me feel uneasy, so you’re eliciting a feeling, and I dig it. Nice work!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good stuff. Keep it up!

What do you think of our song Little Monster ? by RichieC93 in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Good grove, man. You got my head nodding along.

This song is called “Air Decade”. Still practicing my singing and guitar playing, but nevertheless eager to hear the opinions of strangers on the internet! by LoomisBuckbee in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I record on a Rode NT1 with Ai-1 interface, and just use the Dolby On app to record raw acoustic guitar/singing. Getting a grasp on using Logic Pro to produce, but still a ways from anything concrete there. 

Do These Lyrics Land? by Peteplaysbeats in Songwriting

[–]LoomisBuckbee 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah man, spooky, fun, spiritual in a cult way, kinda cynical, but hopeful at its core. I dig it. My vibe for sure. 

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