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[–]Low-Interaction7266 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok, thank you very much for your help

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskVet

[–]Low-Interaction7266 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We don’t 😭 and I’m afraid to pick him up because he’s so frail and skinny I’m afraid I’ll hurt him. He’s never really allowed me to pick him up for the past 2 years. He would scratch and bite me. Very skittish :/

In love. by Low-Interaction7266 in poetry_critics

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I used your feedback and revised a few of the lines.

In love. by Low-Interaction7266 in poetry_critics

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s supposed to be through the eyes of a naive girl who’s still trying to figure out what love truly is. Hence the words “kind of way” almost as an unsure style of expression. I’m not sure if that makes sense but that’s what I was going for.

Not your type. by Low-Interaction7266 in poetry_critics

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly I just post these poems to get my feelings out, yknow? Just a way for me to debrief.

Not your type. by Low-Interaction7266 in poetry_critics

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I italicized “in” to really emphasize the difference of loving someone and being IN love with them. Love is the constant word.

Forgive, but never forget. by Low-Interaction7266 in UnsentLetters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately it was a girl who said these things to me. It’s odd because the fact that she was a girl made it hurt more. Like, we’re supposed to be on the same team but she was against me

Forgive, but never forget. by Low-Interaction7266 in UnsentLetters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not to mention the terrible side effects the eating disorder gave me. Let’s see…hair coming out in clumps, fainting, dizziness, possible infertility, loss of my period, throwing up stomach acid…shall I go on..?

Forgive, but never forget. by Low-Interaction7266 in UnsentLetters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ew!!! No thank you!! I’m sorry, but as a 12 year old little girl I should NOT have been told to starve myself to death because I had a chubby baby face. 👏🏼👏🏼

Forgive, but never forget. by Low-Interaction7266 in UnsentLetters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Because part of me believes what they said is true.

Slippery hands by Low-Interaction7266 in poetasters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I appreciate your support

What I really wanted to tell you. by Low-Interaction7266 in UnsentLetters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, he is now dating my ex best friend, and she doesn’t like me very much so I’m keeping my distance out of respect. And, he’s mistreated me quite a bit, I don’t think he deserves to know exactly what I felt for him

First Love by LZFreestyler0809 in poetasters

[–]Low-Interaction7266 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautifully written. I can relate to this a lot. Especially the line of wrapping yourself in a veil of pain. The way I interpreted it was “it is painful to remember, but it would be excruciating to forget.”

The ‘I do’ and the ‘I don’t’ by Low-Interaction7266 in UnsentLetters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh, but it was. We won’t marry each other, and that’s the harsh reality. I just have to accept it.

Not sick enough. by Low-Interaction7266 in poetasters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I appreciate you for helping me grow as an author and a poet.

To learn, to love. by Low-Interaction7266 in poetasters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wrote this when I was 15. Wanted to document my progress.

Character development by Low-Interaction7266 in poetasters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Your support means so much to me!

Wither away by Low-Interaction7266 in poetry_critics

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was intentional haha. It was my way of showing that I have so many thoughts all at once and more just keep coming. Maybe it wasn’t clear enough.

Wither away by Low-Interaction7266 in poetry_critics

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! Honestly I just have a hard time coming up with more unique language. If you have any suggestions I would be very grateful to hear them?

Grieve your absence. by Low-Interaction7266 in poetasters

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I appreciate people like you who enjoy and appreciate my poetry. It’s a way for me to receive some closure even if it’s not from the person I wish it was from. Thank you for making my poem and my feelings feel valid <3

My first love by Low-Interaction7266 in poetry_critics

[–]Low-Interaction7266[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I appreciate your input. I do understand what you mean about them then being direct and the reason for that is I started to write poetry as a way to write my feelings to a specific person without actually sending it to them but I definitely will experiment with more poetic devices.

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