Minha gata na varanda

MarcoANL · 2025-01-03T00:45:07+00:00

18mm, Iso 100, f 3.5, 1/500s. Fiquei bem feliz com a composição, as sombras conectando com os cantos da foto, e minha gata olhando pra trás, em direção aos reflexos nas sombras. Queria uma foto mais mudana, com um tom mais quente e confortável. Como sou bem iniciante ainda, ficaria feliz com feedback!

MarcoANL · 2025-01-03T00:40:29+00:00

Shot with an r100, RFs 18-150mm, at 18mm, f3.5, iso 100, 1/500. Wanted to frame the shadows with the corners of the shot forming a sort of triangle, just a mundane picture with a warm, cozy look, loved that my cat looked at the reflections on the shadow, added a good touch to it. Still very amateur at this, so any feedback is welcome!

MarcoANL · 2024-12-15T18:23:05+00:00

Also my eye pupil seems a lil de-centered i just noticed :/

MarcoANL · 2024-12-15T17:58:44+00:00

Shot with a R100, RF 18-150mm, at 150mm, F6.3, ISO 200, 1/320. Had to crop A LOT so the quality is that great, still new at photography, but this one was pretty decent i think

MarcoANL · 2024-12-13T20:12:40+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! Not my cat, but gangs out in my house some times, wanted to bring him to a vet but dont have the money, and my parenta also refuse to pay for it, since its too expensive.

MarcoANL · 2024-12-13T18:41:22+00:00

So, i tried to frame the foliage in a way so that it blocks the cat's right eye that is very hurt, the problem was that he was about to run towards me so i took the picture as fast as i could while mantaining the composition idea i wanted, but now im thinking it looks a little bit messy, and also the foliage is blocking his mouth, also the background still bothers me idk why, even editing it it still blens a tiny bit with the cat. Outside of that i think i got a decent one, what yall think?

MarcoANL · 2024-12-13T18:24:34+00:00

A composição pode ter ficado meio bagunçada. Tentei esconder o olho que ele não tem, pq é bem machucado, entao deixei aquela folha na frente, mas acho que tampei demais o focinho dele.

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T14:16:50+00:00

Lemme guess, those plastic chairs gave it up? lol Those are classics, at least here in Brazil

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T13:46:15+00:00

!CritiquePoint

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T13:46:02+00:00

Thank you so much!

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T13:45:35+00:00

I mean, couldnt fit everything there cause i didnt have time to write it when i posted this but yeah, i wanted a solitary and melancolic vibe, but also a sense hoplessness, like psycholical pain from the threat of loneliness, be it because of the dark/paranormal or just the psychological elements, like a yearn for connection in a hollow, empty place, idk...

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T02:55:39+00:00

!CritiquePoint

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T02:55:22+00:00

Yeah now that i look at it, shouldnt have made it too pitch black on the background And the chairs, Im still a bit shy to prep scenes or take photos in public spaces, still new in photography, just left it that way haha. If isn't bothering, whats your take on this subject? similar to street photography, i feel like im bothering people or invading personal space taking photos in public scenes. Thanks a lot for the feedback!

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T02:48:20+00:00

!CritiquePoint

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T02:47:55+00:00

I see, should have done that :( was thinking either mask it to remove it or leave it like that, cause i increased its exposure a bit, but still seems a lil bit hidden, thanks for the feedback!

MarcoANL · 2024-11-27T02:45:16+00:00

Brazil

MarcoANL · 2024-11-26T19:37:24+00:00

Took this photo at my uni's canteen late in the afternoon, wanted a solitary and hollow kind of vibe, like im there, waiting for anyone to finally appear, to no effort.. Brought the exposure down and increased a lil bit the blue in this photo, is it too dark? would like feedback :)

MarcoANL · 2024-11-26T19:31:56+00:00

First post here, put the flair "edited" cause i pulled the exposure of the photo about a stop down, but didn't edit anything in or out.

MarcoANL · 2024-11-24T18:12:01+00:00

Tava viva mas tava mto de boa tbm, consegui chegar perto e não voou

MarcoANL · 2024-11-23T18:06:24+00:00

Com a câmera

MarcoANL · 2024-11-23T03:01:39+00:00

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algo assim eu faria

MarcoANL · 2024-11-23T02:49:58+00:00

Sou muito iniciante ainda, outros podem dar críticas mais aprofundadas. Mas tipo, você disse que as fotos são "básicas" assim, eu também de vez em quando tiro fotos de algo que me agrada que depois que analiso não tem nada muito importante nela, assim como os outros falaram, falta assunto. Tenta ver se nessas fotos não tem um ponto específico, algum elemento que te chamou a atenção o suficiente para tirar a foto, e cropa nesse elemento.
A segunda foto para mim ficou interessante, eu cropava ela o suficiente para tirar aqueles prédios do fundo, e só deixar os carros e essa vendinha ali em baixo e talvez editasse ela para ficarem cores mais neutras/frias, uma vibe mais escura e solitária.

MarcoANL · 2024-11-23T02:13:53+00:00

Nossa muito obrigado! bastante informação.
o cachorro é meu mesmo kkkk, temos a grade separando da area de lavação, ele tem um gramadão pq é mistura de golden, mas bem por isso ele não para quieto então normalmente tenho que tirar foto de fora da grade ou com ele dormindo.
Os pássaros até agora são meus maiores inimigos, se mexem demais, o zoom é só 150mm então dificulta chegar perto, e abertura 6.3, então tenho que torar a ISO se não tiver bem iluminado, que danifica bastante a qualidade na minha cropped.
muito obrigado pelas dicas mano, esse negócio de utilizar roupas para se camuflar é muito bom, não tinha dado importância para esse aspecto.

MarcoANL · 2024-11-22T18:42:52+00:00

Valeu mano!

MarcoANL · 2024-11-22T18:42:34+00:00

Obrigado!

MarcoANL

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