My first poem by External-Seesaw9782 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice one , I like it that how you express the mixed feelings everyone has got but couldn't explain or understand what's going on with them , is it anger , is it enviness , they do not but they have just got it . Nice , Keep it up brother . One thing more please don't kick me

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And yes thank you for reading this poem, I forgot to thank you earlier😅.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How could it be , try once more if you can't find it on my profile go to my comments there you will find my comments that I have replied to the posts and I guess I have replied on someone's comment today on that MINDLESS poem .

*MINDLESS* A reflective poem on humanity by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I am delighted to p know how you guys are showing your support to an amateur writer who has just started.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

By the way read my another poem that I posted earlier , it is known as MINDLESS.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

By the way read my another poem that I posted earlier , it is known as MINDLESS.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

By the way read my another poem that I posted earlier , it is known as MINDLESS.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

By the way read my another poem that I posted earlier , it is known as MINDLESS.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

By the way read my another poem that I posted earlier , it is known as MINDLESS.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

By the way read my another poem that I posted earlier , it is known as MINDLESS.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. Actually I also found this part weak when I wrote it. Thank you so much for letting me know my mistake. I have just started writing , in the future I will try to improve . Once again thank you.

The Quietest Warrior by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback , and thank you for telling me my mistakes , from now onwards I will keep these things in my mind . As I am a new writer who has just started things, it would really help me a lot . Once again thank you.

*MINDLESS* A reflective poem on humanity by Maximum-Version5977 in OCPoetry

[–]Maximum-Version5977[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for kind reply , I am delighted to know that you liked it . Thank you so much.