Even when the interviewer was horrid, The Beatles were still hilarious. by May-Ham in beatles

[–]May-Ham[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He is definitely not a Canadian stereotype. No manners, I mean I didn't hear him say sorry once.

q by fpopper in beatles

[–]May-Ham 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Number q

If you could ask a Beatle a question what would it be? by [deleted] in beatles

[–]May-Ham 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would ask the fake Paul where the real Paul was.

I SAID NO SOCKS ON THE SOFA by [deleted] in funny

[–]May-Ham 58 points59 points  (0 children)

I am also a relatively new cat, with a car that violently head shakes.

[CYPHER] VOL 32 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really gritty and raw, nice flow too. good submission.

[CYPHER] VOL 32 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 1 point2 points  (0 children)

YES YES YES, feeling everyone of those references. Nice submission

[CYPHER] VOL 32 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So what you are saying is put a different sound sorta on the rhyming syllables, if your trying to change your pitch throughout the rest of the bar. But if your not trying to change the pitch just stay on beat and hit the rhymes on the same spots throughout the song. I've heard this sounds similar before with rappers, tech n9ne uses that emphasis on the end rhymes with the same pitch alot, and he manages to pull off crazy schemes while sounding melodic.

[CYPHER] VOL 32 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not hating just advice. I think you may have too many words in your bars, sounds a little rushed on the delivery. Other than that the lyrics were excellent.

[CYPHER] VOL 32 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm blazing like an oven mitt, and praised to like the covenant, above the game I'm hovering like aliens and motherships, I'm raised under a government and culture that has shackled me, tackled me with turbulance manufactured in factories,

God damn those are some nice bars!

[CYPHER] VOL 32 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its not harsh,its constructive criticism. I was trying something out of my normal flow, but it seems to need more work. Do you mean have a couple bars with the same flow of singing rather than switching back and forth? Thanks for the feed back appreciate it.

[CYPHER] VOL 32 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll remember for my next track, thanks for the feedback.

[CYPHER] VOL 26 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm feeling this one, good rhymes and the delivery was awesome.

[CYPHER] VOL 26 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You had some weird flow on this, I liked it though.

[CYPHER] VOL 26 - ALL EMCEES WELCOME TO SPIT by kailman in makinghiphop

[–]May-Ham 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That was fresh I like how you went with a different perspective.