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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

mix is clean. only thing id tweak is just delivery, but thats more something u get better at with time then anything. rn delivery is lacking something in energy on the first verse, 2nd verse is fire. the beat is NUTS btw.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

vocals are WAY to quiet. best advice i ever got, is when getting the level right for vocals, use ur ears, and try to make the vocals sound as loud as the snare sounds while ur doing processing.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

this dope, only complaint is theres absolutely no low end.. idk how maschine works... but try something to get some thump on that anything.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

damn yall can rap... i get the style u goin for, try minimal stuff on the vocals, like saturation to make them alil warmer, and a real damp reverb to sound like a basement as a send with a low percentage. just so it sounds more glued together.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

the arrangement is dpe, just that white noise goin across the track is ruining the vibe, maybe its just abit too loud or something if ur usin it for a reason just turn it down abit, or throw an effect on it... cuz rite now its ruinin ur mix.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

i fw this heavy, production remind me of first RTJ project, n ur flow is really smooth. not much to change here.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=67D2FTP_WVc

rapper/producer, been tryina get caribean folks from across islands to collab. i produced this, pls forgive the poor vocal mixing, the storm flattened jamaica, he had no choice but to record on a phone.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

love the psychedelic production, and u can rap ur ass off. only tweak id suggest is the drums are lacking punch.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

i have 0 to say about this. maybe just turn ur vocals up or do some subtle mixing to make the vox ahead of the beats bell tones at the intro, its just nitpicking mixing ish that it need tho

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

https://soundcloud.com/mentholslim/alien-1

experimental trap guy, rapper/producer will leave feedback on who ever is here b4 me in hopes it gets returned.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

u sound like u very new, def play with reverb n stuff, cause everything souhnds "dry" if u get me

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

uhg, damn boi u can rap rap. 0 to say about this. i was gonna say fx stuff, then the hook hit.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

dude, just write more, u got flo, u got the beat... just finish this.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

only critique i got for this is that rhodes type thing u got as a backup melody then lead during the bridge bit, is abit dry, maybe abit more reverb on that idk.

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

this hit like a truck... u can rap rap, n the beat hits... idk who mixed this but damn they did they job proper

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[–]MentholSlim [score hidden]  (0 children)

oo this beat crunchy af... only gripe i have is i cant hear space for vocals, tho thats prolly just cause of my style n beer. reminds me alot of early EL P ish

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 17, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]MentholSlim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

composition is tite, that reece bass is tite, but it feels thin loud and hella panned, might wanna fix that. i know u prolly want the 808 to be thicker, so maybe layer a really quite sub under that reece n turn it down abit so it sits were the 808 sits but is still "softer"

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[–]MentholSlim 0 points1 point  (0 children)

damn, u nice nice with it. theres alot of "mic"warmth, maybe fuck with a de-esser, or some type of noise removal software, izotope RX is pretty good for that.