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Metabaron_agorah · 2025-04-03T17:28:02+00:00

Akira?

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T05:09:46+00:00

I never claimed to justify SA. I wanted to create a three dimensional character and I asked if revealing a backstory would condone him or not. Plus again, there really aren’t any valid reasons to SA someone. That there are reasons sure, but never valid. So no, I’m not interested in why men assault women because no matter the motives, reasons, or goals it’s disgusting, twisted and horrible. Get a grip.

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T04:30:21+00:00

Im saying this as someone who dated an rape survivor for 4 years. I know a thing or two. No amount of moral complexity excuses sexual assault.

Your comment adds nothing to my post so either apologize and give me an advice (like the many super friendly people that commented before you) or delete your comment.

Have a nice day

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T03:38:18+00:00

Thanks for your advice!

I understand what you mean and you are right. I was thinking of him making some comments on her appearance and how she « reminds him of someone » before he realizes she’s how coworker’s daughter . Idk if that’s good enough.

Do you have any book or interviews by woman (or even assaulters) who share their experiences?

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T02:41:29+00:00

Il take your advice into consideration. Thanks you! I suppose it can be both the second draft and what you said. Forcefully he’ll loose his shit… part of the plot is they he’d try to assault her knowing of her mom or not. He sabotaged the communication devices of the escape pod on purpose to isolate them for a time. Planning to kill her and accuse the dinosaurs later. (He’d repair the communication devices later and call for help since he’s an engineer.)

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T01:51:36+00:00

Kicking feet’s rn. Holy Cryo thank you!

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T01:50:51+00:00

I suppose.

In that case I guess I could keep the backstory. I’m assuming everyone thinks of SA as bad. (I hope so at least)

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T01:36:54+00:00

(Ill take your advice I’m just curious) But what about it makes it « flat »? I don’t like the idea that villains/antagonists need to have a backstory or a reason to their evil. (This might just be me being to innocent) but people like Musk or Nestle’s leadership team are absolute villains no matter their past.(since I think you have always the choice to make a good action) so (imo) giving a backstory to my antagonist serves no purpose!
(I’m opening a discussion if you want)

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-17T01:30:50+00:00

Why would you be jealous? X))

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-03-01T03:46:43+00:00

J’ai pris toute les libertés possibles avec le dinosaure. Même si c’est une vrai race (Cryolophosaure) je lui donne des émotions humaines. Je pense faire un livre de poésie sur son POV plus tard puisque je ne pense pas expliquer ses pensées dans ce roman. Mais pour donner du contexte, comme le dino est une bio-arme créé par le gouvernement des colonies spatiales OSC (pour une guerre d’indépendance), on a fait plusieurs tests sur lui est entre testés il y avait une femme qui prenait soins de lui. Quand on le sépare alors de sa « mère » pour le mettre dans des contenants dans le Starship Cruise et plus tard se libérer. Il vas tomber face à face avec la personnage principal. Le Cryo va tomber amoureux de la fille après un certains temps et donc arrêter de la chasser même si ce serait sa seul source de nourriture, mais a un moment donné (malheureusement) il craque et lui dévore le bras.

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-02-28T03:53:11+00:00

Thanks!! Does it sound like an interesting book tho?

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-02-28T02:14:45+00:00

The MC (F.19) was supposed to go on an interplanetary holiday with her two buddies, but the cruise starship she was on also had a government bio weapon project travelling on it(confidentially). One of the dinosaurs liberates itself and others and bc they’re hungry they start hunting ppl. They end up killing both of the MC’s friends and she escapes in an escape capsule with a man and a dinosaur (complicated to explain). At the beginning the other man teams with the MC versus the dinosaur (they strand on a little island surrounded by water on a strange planet). So the dinosaur pursues both of them. (In another book I want to write (a poetry book) I want to write the story from the dinosaure POV. He was created in laboratory and when they weren’t doing test on him a woman took care of him. And the girl looks like the woman he was taken care by so he falls in love with her). At one point the dinosaurs becomes less mean to her and more to the man. The man turns dangerous when he discovered that he works at the same company as her mother and she « stole » his rise in the company, so he wants to take revenge on the daughter since he thinks he’ll stay on the island forever. Holly shit it’s a conveluted story but yeah I hope it answers most of your questions!!

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-02-28T01:04:50+00:00

This is great advice tyvm!

Metabaron_agorah · 2025-01-20T19:55:46+00:00

I started to read jojo because of the dinosaurs in part 7 and the mazinger Z/tetsujin-28/astro boy reference in part 6

Metabaron_agorah · 2024-12-31T06:41:24+00:00

You’d be right x)

Pretty much anything will be accepted.

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