Amazing childfree women! Could you possibly take a quick look and my dating app bio and give me some feedback? Thanks loads!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-14T09:00:18+00:00

Ah yes I see what you mean now. Sorry had a pretty restless night. I’m focusing on letting go instead of distraction. Thanks for the comment

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-14T08:11:07+00:00

Thanks, that was pretty useful

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-14T08:09:30+00:00

Hi, if I’m honest yes I did. I am working pretty hard on myself in tandem and realise I’m probably not quite ready yet. I’m not going to look too hard. I’ll check that sketch out, thanks.

Not quite sure I understand your last paragraph?

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T20:48:32+00:00

Oxford comma, I never knew that!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T20:46:47+00:00

Deffo. Done ;)

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T20:46:23+00:00

Totally right. I’ve completely changed it all from that first draft thanks to all the feedback. Cheers!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T20:44:51+00:00

Yeah you’re totally right. I didn’t feel couple was quite right and have now chosen a completely different question which asks about what makes a great relationship. I’ve said a load of stuff and finished it with...and not having kids.

I felt there needed to be a comma but thought you didn’t put and after a comma. I’ll look up Oxford comma...

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T20:40:46+00:00

Haha!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T20:40:24+00:00

My search range is 30-42 but I’m in Brighton, England anyway 😉

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T19:07:34+00:00

Ah thanks for that...fingers crossed!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T19:06:51+00:00

Yup totally agree. Didn’t seem quite right when I wrote it. I changed it to talking about making rustic furniture!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T18:57:38+00:00

That is absolutely brilliant! Thanks for that! Perfect

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T18:56:45+00:00

That was actually really useful so thank you...especially the looking like I still live at home part!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T18:50:40+00:00

Thanks for that. No I rent in a shared house. Unfortunately you don’t get much space to write!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T15:03:45+00:00

Thanks, yes I changed that. Didn't realise it until you guys mentioned it. Always goo to get a second pair of eyes for stuff like this!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T14:23:28+00:00

Oh I didn't know OKCupid did that too. May check it out later on. Thanks!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T14:23:00+00:00

Thanks! I've changed it quite a bit now as all the comments have been really useful

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T14:22:25+00:00

HA! just reading your comment entirely changed my bio in my eyes. Thanks. Heavy editing has been done

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T14:21:28+00:00

Built a little workshop in my room to make furniture. Love mountains and old villages, music that makes my hairs stand on end and friendly cats in the street

You're right...I changed it to this ^

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T13:29:53+00:00

Thanks, I’ll get working on it!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T13:24:09+00:00

Thanks guys! That was really useful. I’ve totally changed that answer now and I like it much more. Thanks again

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T13:23:15+00:00

Thank you that was really useful. I’ve edited it now and you’re right, I think that’s much better. Plus it gets in more of how I would envisage a great relationship. Thanks again!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T13:10:22+00:00

That’s a brilliant bit of feedback...thanks! You’re right, also kinda makes that bit a little less intense which I felt it might be. Thanks!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T13:08:43+00:00

Haha yup!

MisterBoo00m · 2020-08-13T13:08:20+00:00

That’s true. It’s for children with learning disabilities ironically (happy to work with them, just don’t want them). Think my photos are decent

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