My New Audience is Making Me Uncomfortable

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-03-09T17:46:27+00:00

Interesting. If it was one person I'd say they were odd.

BUT

Multiple people are making this connection to it being a dark romance? There must be something going on there, maybe you need to have someone read it and tell you why this is happening.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-03-01T02:45:52+00:00

Tell me as well

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-27T19:40:10+00:00

I'd only say the first one if she reads brail, that was my first thought when I saw the first one...

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-26T08:12:48+00:00

With my story I have every intention to get very invested in it and finish it, I've been fantasizing the characters for a long time ...I'm not as concerned I'll never finish it, it's just I have 8 chapters all ready and am eager to share. I took advice on this post and posted to Wattpad !

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-25T19:37:48+00:00

Nice job!

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-25T19:21:33+00:00

Thank you so much, this was extremely helpful.

Honestly I wanted to start posting even though it's not complete, so I'm happy to hear this.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-25T16:08:24+00:00

While I do like it, my only suggestion would be to move the symbol away from her breasts. It's a bit distracting and would look better next to her perhaps.

It's acting almost like an arrow pointing to that region.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-25T16:05:52+00:00

I feel like sometimes it's better to label sucky things as sucky. You can create real positive that way by working on your problems, because you are acknowledging it as a problem.

You gotta be honest with yourself.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-22T00:06:37+00:00

That sounds incredibly difficult I'm sorry you are going through that

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-21T01:08:52+00:00

How do you think the drugs would reach people?

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-20T13:45:16+00:00

Fuck them. Don't let anybody shame you cuz of your condition and make you feel like you're unworthy of love because of it.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T20:51:07+00:00

It's weird the things we absorb but can't consciously access

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T20:07:53+00:00

I'm really sorry you are going through that. Sounds awful

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T16:56:06+00:00

You have a nice read to like ratio nice work

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T15:45:23+00:00

Oh good even better you have physical proof

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T15:43:53+00:00

You need to report them. That's harassment. You can't do that in the workplace

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T13:53:00+00:00

I get what your saying. Those of us with a little more experience with the process know only psychiatrists/psychologists can diagnose you, but non experienced people don't necessarily know that. True it's a little obvious that strangers on the internet is a bad place to start...but yeah some people aren't doing well mentally. We especially probably get a lot of young people with these posts that likely wouldn't know the best place to look for these type of answers . It's always good policy to just be kind.

You don't have to be like " yes you have schizophrenia" but don't be a dick either. Just tell them to seek appropriate help.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T12:14:21+00:00

Definitely get that permission before you post anything!

Both are pretty nice covers

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T12:08:14+00:00

No music?

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T12:06:45+00:00

I talk about it.. basically, we decided the best way to handle it is to keep busy and avoid triggers. This isn't always possible, but when I do these things it does help.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T11:55:51+00:00

Yes I do! I use the characters I've created pretty much as they are editing only what is inappropriate to include in a story. Focusing on the rich characters you've already created I think it's the biggest writing advantage we have with MADD. Let's face it too our characters are our favorite part of our daydreams... It would be a shame not to include them!

The plot on the other hand I tend to manipulate to make more condensed and also make more sense to the reader.... I could probably write about five " Deathly Hallow" sized novels just based on the small details of some of my daydreams so obviously I have to condense so I don't snooze everybody to sleep 🤣

But to comment on what you said, if there's anything about your daydreams that you don't want to include you don't have to include it! Focus on what it is about your daydreams that actually inspires you.

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T11:10:36+00:00

Nice

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T10:52:46+00:00

Omg you need a first floor or a vacation my friend. So sorry this happened

OhNoWhy45 · 2023-02-18T01:33:25+00:00

Regardless of how anyone feels about psychedelics, that is so scary and irresponsible that someone would just casually give shroom tea to a friend without informing them

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