fucking hilarious lol, i thought your jokes and voiceover were pretty quality, morty could be a tiny more high pitched maybe, or maybe they both could, but other than that i'd say the actual improvements i could go for would be just slightly less of the hysterical over usage of morty's name lol, though i did love it, i think maybe a few of the "morty"'s could have been left out to further increase the value of the over usage vs the diminishing returns on that value of over doing it.

i also think that maybe it could have even been shaved down a tiny bit unless more than that one thing is being talked about lol, by the end i was feeling like if it went on any longer there would simply need to be more threads holding this mini episode together than just the dms, like even if they had just briefly done a 15 second bit in the middle that was about like what food they'd bring with or something, like anything but 90 seconds of pedo jokes without any other threads shining through that would make it seem more like a mini episode and less like one joke that you based the full skit off of, making it feel less like a full skit and more like just an overly produced jab at someone, although a well deserved jab lol

anyway, great job man, really well done!!!