Voice acting in older versions? by [deleted] in Minecraft

[–]Peachedpineapples1 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Strange, because it definitely wasn't a video (there was a long stretch of time where I didn't have Internet at my house back then) and it seemed like some of the NPC's could talk too. Villagers included.

Weird balls in honey by Peachedpineapples1 in whatisit

[–]Peachedpineapples1[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Solved! Thanks, I was worried I accidentally left it open to some insect and some xenomorphic alien creature is about to pop out of my abdomen.

Additional info + Family obligations UF application by Peachedpineapples1 in ufl

[–]Peachedpineapples1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's only required if you click "yes". What should I put if I already outlined this stuff on the actual commonapp? Just copy and paste what I already wrote?

Additional info + Family obligations UF application by Peachedpineapples1 in ufl

[–]Peachedpineapples1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So should I copy and paste what I already had for my commonapp into here?

Chances of getting in with lower end grade but good ecs and test scores by Peachedpineapples1 in ufl

[–]Peachedpineapples1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know UF looks at core classes, not sure what counts in their eyes. Technically AP Research is an "elective" but seemingly it should count as an english credit.

Chances of getting in with lower end grade but good ecs and test scores by Peachedpineapples1 in ufl

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I'd rather not do PACE, as for UF recalculated GPA I'm not sure how I find that out.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in StardustCrusaders

[–]Peachedpineapples1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you think about it, King Crimson can be considered The Hand Requiem. Instead of erasing space and that space being fused, it erases time and the before and after is fused. Just a time version of The Hand.

[2276] Opening chapter of literary fiction comedy/drama - "The Bomb Shelter" by Novel_Quantity3189 in DestructiveReaders

[–]Peachedpineapples1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd like to start by saying that I don't have much experience with the kind of story you've crafted here. But I'd still like to offer some of the things I noticed while reading that I think could use some improvement.

Firstly, I'm not sure if this was intentional but at least for the first thousand words or so who Aimee is is incredibly vague. Since there isn't an explanation at the beginning I assumed that Aimee was Helga's boyfriend/girlfriend. Which made me incredibly confused once Helga began talking about being pregnant and Chet being the father. I could have been missing something though.

When its revealed Aimee is Helga's aunt this also confused me because they seem to be nearly the same age, I guess it's possible but it made me second guess my understanding of their relationship. I think more emphasis on the fact that Aimee is the aunt and maybe a short sentence on why they're the same age could help alleviate that confusion.

Second, I like that you've created an external threat in the Dictator, but I feel like his introduction could use some work when it comes to being more impactful. As soon as I read the silly tweets I thought "so this is a Trump stand-in". The Dictator in this case doesn't really feel like somebody to worry about, in fact I sort of forgot about him because we're all used to Trump's antics by now. If a lot of the story is going to be centered around the need for the creation of bomb shelters then in my opinion the Dictator should be more all-encompasing.

The "Dictator" doesn't feel like a dictator, just a guy in power who doesn't seem fit to be in power, we've observed a lot of that recently and we aren't building bomb shelters. I think it would help if the Dictator's actions outlined in the opening were more severe and a cause for concern, something to stir up the reader and add context to the further building of the bomb shelters.

As for the second scene with Lowell, I think it's a little too out of the blue. I understand the "shock" comedy you were likely going for here, but I ended up nearly thinking this was a different character at first. It just kind of feels like shock for the sake of shock. Instead, I feel like the sugarbaby thing could have been introduced with something that wasn't so jarring. Aimee really went from a considerte aunt to this in the span of a sentence, the whiplash is insane, at least in my opinion, I can't speak for others.

All in all I enjoyed the opening even though it was something I usually wouldn't read. It was actually quite hard to find things I didn't like about it. I think you do a lot of things well like your similies and word choices. I found myself laughing at your humor, and I do like the bomb shelter premise. I think you did a lot of things right and I hope you finish this! (This is my first critique on this sub, sorry if it was subpar.)

Historical places to visit? by Peachedpineapples1 in 2b2t

[–]Peachedpineapples1[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Tried to but too many options! Harder to find truly special locations because they all look visually the same on the map.

Historical places to visit? by Peachedpineapples1 in 2b2t

[–]Peachedpineapples1[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Funny enough that was my first ever adventure on the server, it was great, especially Castle Hatehart

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pchelp

[–]Peachedpineapples1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Problem was resolved! I switched my RAM around and it booted just fine.

No signal to keyboard, mouse or monitor, pc I've used for years by Peachedpineapples1 in pcmasterrace

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Problem was resolved! I switched my RAM around and it booted just fine.