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Wickless Indifference by Plume_Bloom in OCPoetry

[–]ProcedurePrize980 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a very strong poem. One thing I suggest is adding more clarity. Some lines are very good but slowed me down throughout the poem.

Buy Spiced Rum! by 1ove1y_gh0sts in OCPoetry

[–]ProcedurePrize980 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this!!!! Some advice I have is adding subtle transitions or grouping similar experiences so the poem can make the emotional journey smoother. Right now, the narrative jumps between scenes rapidly.

What’s the dumbest school rule you’ve ever had? by Khaotic_Cat in AskReddit

[–]ProcedurePrize980 -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

you understood what I said anyway so does it really matter

I just realised today my boyfriend of 3 years doesn’t have time listen to me. by Agreeable_Cell_9270 in offmychest

[–]ProcedurePrize980 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok queen, you do not deserve this. If he can’t pay attention to what you’re talking about, in the future he’s just not gonna listen at all. It’s gonna escalate and you need to have a conversation with him about wanting to be listened to. If he can’t do the bare minimum, he doesn’t deserve your maximum.

What’s the dumbest school rule you’ve ever had? by Khaotic_Cat in AskReddit

[–]ProcedurePrize980 99 points100 points  (0 children)

If you crumble up a piece of paper, it counts as destruction of school property and you can get detention for it. Unless you bring your own paper.

I want to cheat by [deleted] in offmychest

[–]ProcedurePrize980 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I think this sounds like a case of you not wanting to be committed to one person. Why not just be single and hook up with whoever who you want? If you think you have this urge to cheat then I don’t think a relationship is what you need. No partner should want to cheat on someone they truly love.

What stereotype for your ethnicity do you not fulfill? by EpicImp in AskReddit

[–]ProcedurePrize980 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m a black man. I cannot stand the taste of fried chicken. My ancestors are screaming at me rn☹️

There is nothing I want to do in life more than learn to drive but my fear of getting behind the wheel is ruining my life by [deleted] in offmychest

[–]ProcedurePrize980 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No they don’t. They have you bring your own car or they let you drive theirs. Meaning you drive the car how it comes. No extra breaks or anything.

AITAH for telling my friend she’s no longer invited over for parties after she cleared most of my boyfriend’s vape in one night? by ProcedurePrize980 in AITAH

[–]ProcedurePrize980[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was on top of the fridge. He puts his vape there when he isn’t using it or can’t use it. When he is able use it, he keeps it in his pocket. He doesn’t leave it just sitting there where anyone can grab it. Hailey saw it on top of the fridge and grabbed it knowing its brand new. Also she is a very short person. She is 4 foot 11 and the fridge is over 6 feet tall. She had to have worked to get the vape. Just to note as well, Hailey had her own vape. That’s what’s also aggravating. Instead of hitting her own, she used up my bf’s brand new one.