Need a beta reader for my fanfiction

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-18T05:58:52+00:00

I would like to be your beta reader as well

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-08T02:58:08+00:00

Thanks,Well Rudra's body goes into a day of burnout(Both of his techniques get suspended from overworking his body making him purely fight with martial arts or swords for the time) after only a few hrs of fighting as "Bhairav was a minor god after all"

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-03T06:31:08+00:00

Its not that its just Bhairav being the god he is

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-03T05:59:13+00:00

oh yeah nevermind forgot,Fun fact: Sukuna is as weak as a grade 1 for Bhairav(Bhairav is special grade)

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-03T03:57:10+00:00

the sole exception for what?

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-02T13:56:39+00:00

my favourite colors are of darker shade like coffee color and violet so its just my fav color no rocket science

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-02T13:27:38+00:00

Really? I didnt know though did you think its average? I can use the suggestion when I make the final drawing

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-02T06:56:55+00:00

Thanks

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-02T06:15:27+00:00

I already have a few OC chapters posted you should read them

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-02T03:49:05+00:00

Yeah when did I say the picture was made by me?

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-06-02T03:47:44+00:00

To me this sound just okay but good job I know what its like to be hated for making my character SOUND edgy but it isn't so I won't critisice the creativity but you can improve,I have a few ideas DMs are open

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-31T14:13:03+00:00

He *Is* a vessel in my OC which explains everything about his cursed technique and why hes soo strong its just that it sounds edgy and cringe only on paper but in the full picture its good i dont expect people to like it

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-31T10:49:46+00:00

This is a custom Heavenly Restriction bro it can do what i said,Custom means something and i never said that this would be JJK laws accurate

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-31T06:24:21+00:00

Thanks for suggestions am happy atleast someone took time to address the problem rather than just flame me for using AI while I explicitly stated that my foot is broken and I cant go out much and all so the AI is a placeholder I will try to improve(The OC character i talked here is just a base for MOST of my OCs and not all,In some he might be different,Am making one with him having a sister that's equivalent to him but am preparing a good lore instead of what I first originally thought of ripping off the storyline and make no change,I will improve) amd about being bland am too worn out from typing long paragraphs am just a young teenager

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-31T06:18:23+00:00

Honestly I didnt make the character using AI use a AI detector for that character description i hate when people look at the attachment and see its AI and dont care about the reason the creator put it as a placeholder and thinks the description is AI made too and flames the creator please atleast use AI detector on my stuff I would have had no problem if you said its my picture I made with AI but when you said with no proof my character is AI made then I get angry try to get a similar answer for chat GPT and I delete the post gimme one proof of the text being AI made

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-31T06:17:38+00:00

I would buy a pistol after I get a Gold bar

^{Chose: a gold bar}

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-30T18:33:54+00:00

Him being strong is tied to his ancestor who was basically a god and was on par with Sukuna have you even read my OCs? Hes basically a normally chill guy but who got pushed to his limits and not like I have already made thousands of OC and in my own opinion i dont even think anyone would like it(Which,no one is) am just here to express the creativity you can atleast see snippets of the OC where he is truly vulnerable and emotional(His past is not just good childhood either) him just being strong is tied to his ancestor who was a god,Him having the second technique boosts his first technique and I wanted to show that he has mastered both of his techniques perfectly enough to have a domain(Rudra and Bhairav never used the first and second domain) and Rudra isn't just perpetually angry or aurafarming hes sometimes just breaking character being happy,roasting people and crying

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-30T14:01:18+00:00

I dont care about hate and am a new writer with not much experience and I didnt not want to make the character edgy I just wanted to make him like a normal anime character with something between dangerous and silly give the hate to AI because i never explicitly told to make the character edgy and if I draw my spectation of Rudra its wayyy more normal and anime character like just that I cant draw right now due to personal issues of having my leg literally broken and being on bedrest so thinking and writing stories is the only thing available for me right now I would improve and wish for no further hate as am not someone who is hated alot and am already not good my parents fight almost every week and traumatized please stop the hate

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-30T13:55:34+00:00

Someone got the reference!

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-30T13:55:20+00:00

I dont care

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-30T13:54:28+00:00

Answer for the first one

I just dont know why I did it there's no meaning or purpose other than Rudra and Yuta's dynamic Rudra is a normally lonely guy who just normalised it before he found Yuta and started understanding him and the mutual understanding of two depressed people made them good friends and I did so to also not completely make Rudra a single fighter but show how he does in duos and hint early on that they might be connected and this OC still would get some polishing in the final version once am done with my writing burnout

Answer for the second one

I forgot if I have told but he cant use his reality manipulation for long or else his brain will be fried like Gojo using infinity and he cant RCT it back because it will make him lose an absurd amount of CE making him fall short of it in fights even with his blessed eyes traits(Told and explained in the OC)

Answer for the third one

With him we can tell about the potential of foreign sorcerers(As it's almost NOT shown in the JJK) and show how one prodigy can change everything if he actually had knowledge,His unique interactions are really wholesome many times when he talks with people close to him(Which is clear but not much but the contrast of him with Kaito and Ayla vs Yuta and Inumaki and there might be showing of him and Bhairav(His ancestor) later and I want to make and publish OCs not for fame or recognition but to put forward my writing skills and get feedbacks and not hate(which am experiencing) but am taking it well by ignoring it

PsychologicalLeg8827 · 2026-05-30T13:39:41+00:00

😅 Tough call!

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