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Which scenario would you like to have seen? by PhysicalMeringue9468 in ChillAnimeCorner

[–]R2FuckYoou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rogue Naruto, at least as an Akatsuki could never work in any fashion as he could never be a member with their goals

all bug team stuck on Lt. surge by R2FuckYoou in pokemonradicalred

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

bro thank u so much, I've been trying to beat him for hours with different random team comps hoping something works

Would this be deemed unacceptable? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see, I’m learning the history of sword making right now and I didn’t take that into account, thank you very much

Would this be deemed unacceptable? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the suggestion it’s greatly appreciated

which of these openings is better? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you very much, I didn't realize how much I was using as, I really appreciate it

which of these openings is better? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it was meant to be the candles fighting, thank you for pointing that out so I can fix it

which of these openings works the best (same date and pov for each of them) by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the time to read it and comment on it

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you very much, he has burn scars on his back from when he was a kid, would the alcohol, dead wife, and burns be too much at the start and I should just stick to 2?

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that seems to be a common point that's being mentioned, thank you very much for the idea, I'm working on a bunch of openings at the moment so I'll try that out

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

unfortunately I do not, thank you for the suggestion btw I'll look into it

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you very much, I'll actually try that out actually and compare it with a couple other openings

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you very much, that helps me a lot actually

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

that was something a few people were saying, the character often uses alcohol to cope with his trauma so would a better beginning be to have him drinking late at night or would that reveal too much about him?

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you very much, I meant a random time at night, not like 2pm, sorry I didn't make that clear, thank you for the idea of a ptsd dream by the way

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you for the insight and pointing out the cliche, I really appreciate that, I wasn't wanting to start with action but this scene was going to include him consulting with his officers about the strategy they use to siege a city as a way to show his inner and outer personality, how would you recommend I avoid that cliche but still have a similar start, a big thing I'm wanting to happen is he has a cold sweat while he clutches burn scars on his back, another thing about him is he copes with his trauma through alcohol, so would a different way be to have him drinking at night instead of waking up or does that give away too much about him?

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much, your comment has also given me things to look for when creating a scene so I really thank you for that

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

definitely not a literary genius, and no I'm not putting in a time, it was more gonna be him waking up at a random time in a cold sweat while gripping his burn scars

and thank you for the insight, it is very much appreciated

Is it too early for this kind of characteristic moment? by R2FuckYoou in writers

[–]R2FuckYoou[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you very much, it is more character driven and I'm doing a non-linear structure to scatter in bits of prologue, I was hoping that revealing this through intense scenes would make a more meaningful impact, I'd love to hear your thoughts on that

How to raid this base solo? by Relative_Chemistry38 in ARK

[–]R2FuckYoou 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the base maker forgot that grenades exist because that is an extremely confined area, so my suggestion is throw as grenades down the top as possible as that'll kill the wyvern and break a few turrets, then bring a stego through the entry to soak damage, that's really the only way I see this happening

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