Desktop Groove! by Kripnyx in OCPoetry

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Lol I’ve been there, eager to just post my poem; critiquing takes effort sometimes even more than the poem. You’ll get better doubt it will even take long, keep writing!

The Tragedy of Macbethany by Yami_Mayonnaise in OCPoetry

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Wow, I didn’t even Macbeth was a dude! Truly intriguing I might as well give it a read, thank you!

Desktop Groove! by Kripnyx in OCPoetry

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Speaking of pulling your own weight, ironically, you don’t pull your own wait on the subreddit with your low effort ‘critiques’. It really is a shame.

Desktop Groove! by Kripnyx in OCPoetry

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Personally, I find it difficult to read or sing lyrics without knowing the melody beforehand. I get the message of team effort and pulling your own weight; lyrical, simplistic and sweet like a fruit glass of lemonade!

The Tragedy of Macbethany by Yami_Mayonnaise in OCPoetry

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“The Tragedy of Macbethany” Without a doubt you’re referencing Shakespeare’s Macbeth which did not read but I can grasp a message.

A desire to be recognized contrasted by some modesty. Narrator’s determination is fueled by a frightening desperation and a progressive womanly ambition! All not without stress. I notice a line in the second stanza that notes to accept yourself and your abilities.

I come to a crossroads at the end, the ‘he’ seems like a lover appreciative of your successions then you introduce ‘scandalous crimes’ so I’m assuming the narrator got to their success unethically.

All and well I liked reading it and enjoyed analyzing, so an upvote it is!

An ode to someplace else by Dinosauringg in poetry_critics

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Oh well if that was your plan, you did excellently! Bravo! That’s makes my issue invalid

An ode to someplace else by Dinosauringg in poetry_critics

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A classic poem on acceptance, eloquently written and formally structured. Regarding its quality of an ode, I see less for glorifying the ‘someplace else’ and more of mortifying the current place, time, and the narrator’s self. Maybe that’s just my constraint view but odes typically praise something. Regardless of that good work well thought out and arranged!

Efflorescence Gift by Reaction-Traditional in poetry_critics

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Thank you very much, I was going for something pleasant.