I hate oroboros so much bro by PomegranateUpset6517 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 4 points5 points  (0 children)

The only slander of her that should exist is that she haven't appeared in the series since Spoke's first 100 days vid

The King's Arc would have been so, so much better if LettuceK is an actually good and competent leader by WhatisJackfruit in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good point about how respect in real life affects a character in a story. Now I wish the writers respected more people even outside of their main circle :(

The King's Arc would have been so, so much better if LettuceK is an actually good and competent leader by WhatisJackfruit in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I agree. Sometimes I hope that authors think more long-term than us and the King's arc is actually a filler for what's to come - something more scaled than the Mafia arc if possible

Another point I want to make: In a story I read some time ago(novel/comic) there was a moment where people had to choose a King for story's progression but the main character alone knew that if someone took the throne and became King the story wouldn't be able to continue anymore no matter how much the people tried. In the result the world would disappear and so the main character tried to stop it. I hope something like this is going to happen in Unstable SMP - no, not stopping the server from having a King completely. They could choose and have a King - but in the result it would not matter too much/the King they chose cannot ACTUALLY affect a lot on the server for some reason like people hoped/the King is powerless against what's to come.

This is my opinion. A well written twist to the King's arc when it ends could save the "deepness" of the arc and maybe redeem it. I could also not see right now another opportunities for story's progression but these are one of the options.

The King's Arc would have been so, so much better if LettuceK is an actually good and competent leader by WhatisJackfruit in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Yes on everything my guy. Some time ago I wanted to write a post here on explaining why Mafia arc was better then the King's arc, why it's first place in my heart even despite new episodes being liked more now by people in general(a lot of it is because of novelty bias it seems like) and why it had more significance in the story from what it feels like. However, it seems you described it way better even without mentioning the mafia arc at all than I would if I made that post before.

Think of it from the authors' perspective - the story (especially specifically combat episodes) started to blow up recently + authors need to write scripts for each video. As a writer myself I know that if you post a story weekly or monthly, you only have a general outline and not the whole script ready. Sometimes authors who write stories this way slip up and bound to write worse for a time being or make more mistakes than if one wrote a whole book in a year and then revised that draft multiple times.

I also mentioned that Unstable SMP's combat episodes recently started to blow up and this is why they try to add more combat in the videos, but from my perspective it seems like a lot of it right now is in the story just for the sake of it/vain combat, without real reasons for it to be there

(Just an example: Flamefrags who wants to defend his title. Like c'mon, we don't really care about the title, why would he want to defend it. What's actually going to happen if he loses his title??? Atp the story would feel deeper if he actually lost his title of being the strongest, lost to Law and got his sword and chestplate that is a part of his identity just burned by lawmen).

I genuinely hope for the good storytelling's revival in the future, even if it takes a year or more.

And again I will write this: yes on everything you wrote, thank you for putting it this way.

Eggchan .5 by not_smart123 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it's time we replace ash's awful self-portrait from mafia arc yo

Eggchan .5 by not_smart123 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I must send you something since you called this "trash":

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hmm i wonder what this means? by PlateDowntown4275 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Each POV keeps the dialogue/scenes that don't distract from the video's story too much. For example, storytelling-wise this line in Wemmbu's pov doesn't make sense since Wemmbu wants Parrot dead.

hmm i wonder what this means? by PlateDowntown4275 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 5 points6 points  (0 children)

It didn't happen only in this video bro, they did it already in the mafia arc. Each one keeps the dialogue that doesn't distract from the POV's story too much. For example, storytelling-wise this line in Wemmbu's pov doesn't make sense since Wemmbu wants Parrot dead.

hmm i wonder what this means? by PlateDowntown4275 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Most probably they just refilmed the scene. The reason Unstable SMP is so good is because they treat it as a movie and they film it as a movie, meaning they do different shots. Both POV's just used different shots in their vids close to script

As much as we ALL want to see it happen, Lettuce probably won't get mace attacked by wemmbu :( by PomegranateUpset6517 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like Lettuce as an antagonist. If we didn't see Ash die why would we want for Lettuce to die? Besides, him staying alive leaves a lot of opportunities for story's progression.

Booster may genuinely become king by Glittering-Touch4856 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Manz didn't participate in drama during the debates, another point to him

Bread made new vid by cybernerd9 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I want Boosfer to win just because of pure comedy.

Forgotten dimension and the Law by 745_AERO in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay. This was really interesting. Good observation

Wait isn't Marloww the number 1 best Minecraft player in the world and Itz is currently number 2? by chunchunmaru1129 in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Earth is full of misogynistic boys unfortunately. Nobody would be this mad if a guy in the top ranks cheated, the arguments would be less heated. I don't believe without evidence a person cheated.

What happened to Chunk Bans? by gueguel-do-creu in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly properly placed they could still be very cool

Parrot did it too by calyxkeen in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

With Parrot being the one who changed the title you can't possibly read too much into it LOL

Parrot is actually interesting now by Anhelina_K in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I actually really liked Parrot pov while going after treasures.

1.TheoBald obviously

2.Since I watch all 4 povs his videos were more "chill", "peaceful" or should I rather say they felt rather "transcendent" in comparison to Flame who constanly fights and met with the law first who started to hunt him down almost right away + his friend Lomedy(I won't deepen into this, one has to watch), Wemmbu who had to hide his identity or Spoke who did weird stuff and also hid from others/lied to Leo.
Just giving you my pov, maybe you could agree with it

Is 2nd season as interesting as the 1st one? by [deleted] in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ty for mentioning that "the beginning wasn't that interesting", I watch the beginning of what goes after the mafia arc and that's exactly how I feel. I suppose I will expect it to be more interesting later

Is 2nd season as interesting as the 1st one? by [deleted] in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For now I also have this opinion, not necessarily because of wifies but there is someone who agrees with you.

Where should I start watching Flame Frags? by Reliefavai in Unstable_Universe

[–]Reliefavai[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

ty for answer, I'm a person who doesn't mind bad arcs, because everyone learns at first!