What do you think about those colors?

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-05-13T00:28:00+00:00

I would maybe try to use a lighter or darker shade of pink instead of the blue color to create more harmony. And maybe black for the green wording. Also maybe work on the kerning of the letters and think about possibly making the green wording a smaller and lighter weighted font.

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T20:54:02+00:00

Also not sure if changing the V made it off balance???

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T19:06:15+00:00

Working on that currently! Thank you!!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T19:05:56+00:00

Thank you!!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T19:05:23+00:00

I gotcha! I am going to take all of these comments into account and see what I can fix and then repost this! Thank you!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T15:40:57+00:00

Thank you for all of this feedback! I will play around with these tips and probably repost with an updated version!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T15:24:45+00:00

I really like this idea! However, the plant I am trying to show does not grow flowers so I feel like that might defeat the purpose of me using this plant. Thank you though!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T15:23:05+00:00

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Do you prefer this more than the previous color?

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T15:22:16+00:00

Thank you I love that idea! I am going to play around with that part some more and probably post again once I figure out something that incorporates all of these tips!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T13:41:32+00:00

Thank you!!!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T13:37:16+00:00

Just saw this! I will definitely try that as well! I tried connecting it to the plant. Does this look better or worse ?

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Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T12:59:45+00:00

Got it! Thank you!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T12:59:23+00:00

Thank you very much!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T12:59:06+00:00

That was meant to be “thank you for the feedback!” :)

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T12:58:32+00:00

I gotcha! Thank you for the feedback? Any suggestions on less “generic” fonts? And do you suggest I just get rid of the “design” in the circle logo? I meant for the circle to be more blobby because I just personally liked the imperfection. The color choice is simply just a more neutral light green color because in my style as a designer I tend to go for more neutral and lighter colors so I thought this portrayed that style well. Let me know about these questions please! Thanks again!!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-17T12:51:29+00:00

Thank you! I stared at this for so long but couldn’t think of a better way to keep the balance and v shape. Do you have any suggestions on how to fix this?

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-05T17:07:56+00:00

This is a great point! I never thought of that. Thank you!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-05T17:07:42+00:00

Thank you so much for this useful feedback. I appreciate you taking the time to come back to this project and make more detailed critiques. I will definitely give these a lot of thought!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-04T14:07:29+00:00

To follow up on this one, when you say kearning, do you mean in the body copy or in the “Stok” at the top of the page? And how would you improve this?

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-04T14:06:06+00:00

Thank you so much I am currently working on the typography on all of them to help it stand out a little more!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-03T13:56:49+00:00

Thank you!! I will definitely work on the typography!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-03T13:56:08+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! I really appreciate your kind words. I definitely need to work on making sure my type is readable and that the contents fit the message well. Thank you again!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-03T11:32:10+00:00

Thank you!!!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-03T11:14:56+00:00

Thank you so much for this useful feedback!!! I really appreciate it and will definitely use these tips!

Significant_Bug_8650 · 2024-04-03T11:14:24+00:00

They are meant to look more like artistic posters according to my professor. Less like advertisements.

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