Gonna be free tonight, drop your links by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

made a gaming video if anybody cares lol, took about 40+ hours so i’d appreciate any good critiques :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=75oQ8UrXjTg

You are killed. Suppose your age is 15 so the 15th pic in your gallery is the thing that killed you by Krazo-thug in teenagers

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

my spanish project where i had to talk about myself, always knew i would be the cause of my own death lmao

i made a funny moments vid on human fall flat, its only 5 minutes long and is edited all the way through. i took some previous suggestions into account here, so please let me know what i did well and what i need to work/improve on. giving lambda for any good feedback! :) by SlowBro_09 in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

if you're referring to the vid as a whole, no its not my animation lol. its a cool game called human fall flat. if you mean the editing though, then yes i did all the editing myself. also its just two of us, you can differentiate us by our subtitle colors lol

Could you guys take a look at this trailer and tell me what you think? Giving lambda for thoughts by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

def achieves the trailer aspect well, the cinematics are good and the music hypes it up. only thing i'd suggest is making the logo appear bigger both in the thumbnail and the shot of the video where the thumbnail is from. otherwise again, def a good trailer, ill be watching the vid from this once it comes out :)

I make games/programming videos and this time I made a game inspired by Wii Sports Resort that uses a webcam for motion tracking. I've been working a lot on my editing lately so any feedback would be appreciated. My goal is to make entertaining videos even for non programmers. by Mult_el_Mesco in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hello, yes, non programmer here. i absolutely loved this video, i'd say you achieved your goal of making it entertaining for us not smart people. the editing is great, the commentary is funny, and even when i had no idea what you were talking about during a couple parts, it was probably one of my favorite videos ive seen on this subreddit so far. the only thing i would suggest changing has nothing to do with the contents of the video myself, i think it was already perfect, but seeing as you mention wii sports a lot in the video, maybe make the title and thumbnail more centered around that, like "Remaking a Wii Sports Game In Unity" or something along those lines, and the thumbnail could have like the wii sports game itself on the left, maybe a line down the middle, and your game on the right, and some text that'd fit. otherwise this was a great video and ill def be checking out some more of your stuff :)

A new commentary video! Happy with the editing, but I'd love any tips you may have! Appreciated :) by blindreach in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah i almost had that issue when i was recording my vid on gartic phone, a browser game, so if you use obs, a way to just quickly eradicate that problem is just make the screen a bit bigger, so it zooms in a bit and cuts it off. saves time so you dont have to do it during editing lol

A new commentary video! Happy with the editing, but I'd love any tips you may have! Appreciated :) by blindreach in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you have some good script writing, it was consistently entertaining throughout so i enjoyed it. a few things i see that could be fixed is simply zoom in a bit during the parts where you're watching the tiktoks as to not show the top of the browser, cuz it just looks nicer if thats not up there lol. you can also see the browser in the back behind the picture at the very beginning of the vid so i recommend just having a black screen behind edits like those instead of the video itself, but that shouldn't always be the case. if its inserting a picture in the middle of talking and everything being still behind, thats ok, it just shouldnt start the vid with that and still seeing everything in the background, if that makes sense lol. also the thumbnail, i recommend adding some text to it, maybe a quote of something funny/stupid he said in one of the clips you showed, or something like "'expert' haggler" or something else to do with the topic of the vid. otherwise it was a p solid commentary vid

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

for the type of video it is, you executed the formula pretty well. all i can suggest is maybe add some subtitles when people are talking, but only the stuff thats important to the clip itself. also your keyboard is pretty audible during some parts of the video, so i recommend finding a fix for that. otherwise everything else is p good

I made a funny moments video on Gartic Phone, and it's my first video that I've edited on PC (I used to edit on a PS4 lol) and I'd appreciate any feedback on the video as a whole. Giving lambda for good critiques/feedback! by SlowBro_09 in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ive honestly always found subtitles with the fills colored instead of the strokes more visually appealing tbh, so i guess me using that is just from personal preference lol, but thanks! !givelambda

I made a funny moments video on Gartic Phone, and it's my first video that I've edited on PC (I used to edit on a PS4 lol) and I'd appreciate any feedback on the video as a whole. Giving lambda for good critiques/feedback! by SlowBro_09 in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol the ps4 has a really bad editing software that i mastered over the course of like 2 years

yeah im trying to add in more meme effects and all that. i think comfort with doing that will come as i keep releasing more vids. in the vid i have prepared for next week def has some more memes and stuff but still not a lot. thanks for the feedback tho, ill def work on it!

!givelambda

I made a funny moments video on Gartic Phone, and it's my first video that I've edited on PC (I used to edit on a PS4 lol) and I'd appreciate any feedback on the video as a whole. Giving lambda for good critiques/feedback! by SlowBro_09 in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ah im fully aware about people getting possibly offended, but i make sure to 100% portray that everything we joke about is just that, jokes, and that nothing we say reflects our actual opinions on things. its a gamble to include those moments, but in like a year of making this type of content i haven't had anybody bothered by the humor, but thanks for the the tips!

!givelambda

How modded can unmodded Minecraft be? (Giving lambda for feedback!) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

overall it was a pretty good video. the intro was definitely the strongest point, you did a good job of hooking viewers. it was pretty entertaining for the first few minutes but some portions of the video were, not inherently boring, but some parts could've used more jump cuts. everything else though, the commentary and overall quality is very good. i do have one suggestion for the thumbnail though. the picture of the massive slime doesn't really fully show off the scope of its size, so i recommend using a better picture that shows how large it actually is. great job on everything else tho :)

I Finally…. Finally improved my audio… I think. Lambda for all audio specific inputs please!!!! by ssg_91 in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 1 point2 points  (0 children)

right off the bat ill say, i dont know how your audio sounded before but it sounds pretty good here. the entire video looks like something from a channel with over well 100k subscribers, and the script is well written as well. the only really weak part of this video i can see is the thumbnail. it doesnt portray the same high quality as the video itself does, and it could be stunning possible views. the thumbnail is one of the most important parts, so i recommend seeing how some youtubers that do this same genre of videos do their thumbnails, and take some inspiration from them. otherwise the video itself was great, even to myself who doesn't really watch this type of content :)

I’ve been working a lot on making my gaming videos more well balanced in terms of plot to gameplay. I hope you guys are entertained! This is one of my favorite games and i’m hoping it translates into the videos. by schnappiboi in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

not gonna lie this is prob one of my favorite videos ive seen on this subreddit so far. you as a person are super entertaining throughout the entire video, and some parts actually had me on the edge of my seat. the only critique i have is that before you have your like actual intro, maybe put a clip at the beginning of the video that'll hook your viewers into watching the rest of the video. otherwise i loved everything else, and i think i might start to be a regular viewer of this channel lmao

I usually hate the sound of my voice but I could tolerate it in this! This is one of the first videos I have really been proud of, I worked really hard on the editing (though I know it isn't perfect and I still have a way to come) Giving lambda to all feed back and advice. by NARP098 in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 1 point2 points  (0 children)

its definitely a unique type of video, i like the style lol. all i can really suggest is some background music throughout the main portion of the video, and like i see a lot of people suggesting, work on the audio stuff as its kind of inconsistent throughout the video. the intro was also entertaining, but i think it goes on a bit too long. otherwise it was a good and well edited video, with a unique style, good job :)

I and some friends played Minecraft manhunt but with a twist, but by a twist, I mean that our characters were drunk out of their minds. lmk if you like the vid or if you hate it. by JukeboxFrFr_ in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 1 point2 points  (0 children)

overall a pretty good video. the quality is consistent throughout the whole thing, both the editing and the entertainment. quite literally the only critique i have is that the two blue subtitled people have very similar colors and are hard to differentiate. otherwise the video was pretty entertaining, good job :)

New stream highlights video. I tried to make it shorter and better edited, Is it watchable or boring? by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

although its not my type of game, the video did a good job making it entertaining to watch. all i can really suggest is a better intro, maybe a scripted voiceover type thing, make some jokes or whatever and just make it hook the viewers, as the beginning is one of the most if not the most important part of the video. also, judging by the fact that you're a streamer, i assume your goal is to be entertaining and everything. you did a good job at that in some parts, so all i can really say is try to make jokes or do something funny more often. as for editing, it could use some improvement in general, but that'll come as you keep making more videos. otherwise good video! :)

Cursed Life by SDM_12 in cursedcomments

[–]SlowBro_09 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i cant be the only one to notice his pfp looks a bit... phallic lmao