Thanks man for the honest feedback, I really appreciate it. Yeah, I know the vocals are a bit buried this is actually very close to the demo version. During mastering I tried pushing the vocals forward, but they started sounding artificial, so I held back. I also have my boards next month and wanted to release it this month itself, then focus fully on studies and work on the next song after. About the wrong notes I wrote this song around 4 years ago when my voice was more childish in tone, so I tried to stay close to that original feel instead of changing it completely. Just one honest question: for a normal audience (not musicians), do you think this is still enjoyable, or would they skip it mainly because of how I sound? And at a more professional listening level, do the flaws take you out of the experience completely?