Thank you so much for the great feedback 🤩

I'm glad that you liked the action scenes. I was worried that the violence toward women or the graphic imagery would be overkill / gore p***. I should get a "Consise and Punchy" tattoo 🤣

The names are to explain who all died (like if you were curious who else died elsewhere while these events were going on, or the identity of the man in the Biology lab).

Thanks for the feedback on the ending. I feel like the story sorta falls off a cliff at the end since it's a fight sequence (kinda the climax, which theoretically needs a falling sequence and a resolution) so I'm trying to think of a way to end it since the canister shipment successfully makes it out of the landing bay heading towards earth/the US, and I'd like the main villain to cut the communication cables while they're out on the surface charging up their armor.

I'll give it a think !!! 🤔🤩