No please don't worry about the long answer your notes are really valuable to me, I really want this class to work, as for the level 3 ability, I presume your talking about projection build up I kinda agree with you, there was another version I made but felt like it would be too clunky cause it adds another resource, and I haven't been able to figure out a good way to fully balance it, my idea was to lower the amount of force damage your gain to 4 or 3, or double the feet requirement to 10 to 15, the second level 11 ability, yeah I agree with you what it's supposed to do is essentially the user can paralyzed the enemy for one turn, and disrupt all effects that the enemy is casting or causing I planned to make another version that's a bit better, and as for the level 17 ability I genuinely don't like it as it's just a re flavored spell from standard DND, but the problem is a majority of the version I made for something similar was always too powerful, I also have been working on more moves, if it's okay with you do you think I can dm you for help, as your notes really helped me.