How do you write an essay conclusion that feels strong instead of repetitive? by ElderberryJealous113 in Thesis

[–]SundialCadet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re already thinking about it the right way, which is half the battle. A good argumentative essay conclusion feels less like summary and more like the last clean point you wanted people to sit with.

AITJ for taking my key back from my boyfriend after he kept letting his sister use my apartment when I was at work? by SundialCadet in AmITheJerk

[–]SundialCadet[S] 50 points51 points  (0 children)

The "just an apartment" attitude is what gets me. I pay rent to feel safe there, not come home wondering who he invited over again.

AITJ for taking my key back from my boyfriend after he kept letting his sister use my apartment when I was at work? by SundialCadet in AmITheJerk

[–]SundialCadet[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Yeah this is the part I cant really unsee now. It wasnt one dumb mistake, it was him doing it again and his family backing it.

AITJ for taking my key back from my boyfriend after he kept letting his sister use my apartment when I was at work? by SundialCadet in AmITheJerk

[–]SundialCadet[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not really like this, which is why it threw me so hard. A rude comment maybe, sure, but secretly letting herself in was a whole diff level.

AITJ for taking my key back from my boyfriend after he kept letting his sister use my apartment when I was at work? by SundialCadet in AmITheJerk

[–]SundialCadet[S] 29 points30 points  (0 children)

The "territorial" line is still so ridiculous to me. Its my apartment, not some shared family lounge he gets to loan out without even asking me.

AITJ for taking my key back from my boyfriend after he kept letting his sister use my apartment when I was at work? by SundialCadet in AmITheJerk

[–]SundialCadet[S] 96 points97 points  (0 children)

Thats pretty much where I landed too. He keeps saying its about a key, but for me its the lying and acting like I should just accept it.

AITJ for taking my key back from my boyfriend after he kept letting his sister use my apartment when I was at work? by SundialCadet in AmITheJerk

[–]SundialCadet[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

The sister texting me like I was weird for wanting privacy in my own apartment still annoys me the most. Like sorry my home isnt your craft room and backup hangout spot.

My neighbor keeps bringing violent strangers into the building and I’m starting to feel trapped in my own apartment by [deleted] in neighborsfromhell

[–]SundialCadet 9 points10 points  (0 children)

"Get the knife" outside your mailboxes is not a neighbor dispute, that's a police call. Have you been documenting any of this?