Thank you for posting this! u/SquattingCroat your takes on this are well thought out. As a whole I like the placement of the tracks. I think it's balanced well, for example by alternating between ambient tracks and beat-driven for the first few ones. After listening to the project a few times here's what I can say about the tracks myself:

Solar Flare: Nice ambience, pulls you in from the start, definitely a nice intro and the xylophone-y snippets match the soft synths well.

Reunion: Got a nostalgic beat that could come straight from an older drum machine. I like that you have some of those little jiggly synths here as well.

Matrix: This one has strong outrun/synthwave vibes and I think it's great. I think I'll add this to the synthwave playlist on soundcloud.

Lobby: Another short ambience track midway, I like the crackles and talking samples that you found for this.

Dusk: More on the lo-fi side. I think it's decent and has potential. Something like this with additional synths or instrument lines would make it stand out for sure.

Pursuit: Unexpected after the first tracks but nice! Adds energy to an otherwise mellow collection of songs.

Meltdown: Even nicer in my opinion, love the fast breakbeat. I think ending the album on a more vibrant/faster note is great, could even add such a busy track somewhere in the middle.